Fiona766 Posté(e) le 9 octobre 2019 Signaler Share Posté(e) le 9 octobre 2019 Bonjour, je dois décrire un bilm biopic et inciter un ami à aller le voir. Voici mon essai: Merci d'avance pour vos corrections et conseils. Théo. Biopic : Rasta Rocket You must (to) go to the cinema to see a bopic. (Who) which is entitled Rasta Rocket. (He) it is created( to) in Holliwood by Jon Turteltaub. This movie is happening in Jamaica which is a very nice country. I think it's a movie you'll like because it's talk about sports. During this film there is a reversal that totally changes his life and I find it very funny because they practice atlétisme to change in bobslage, it is very comical because at the start they practice a sport of summer and at the end they practice a sport of winter so they never saw snow before. It's a comedy with suspense and action. I'm sure you'll like this movie, it's all you like! Personally I was very happy at the end. Moreover this film had a great success. Finally I really liked that. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 9 octobre 2019 E-Bahut Signaler Share Posté(e) le 9 octobre 2019 Bonsoir, Biopic: Rasta Rockett You must (to) << Un auxiliaire modal doit toujours être suivi d'un infinitif sans to >> go to the cinema to watch/see a biopic (Who) << who ne s'emploie que pour un antécédent de personne which is entitled Rasta Rocket.(He) << Révise l'emploi des pronoms sujet, il y a urgence ! >> It is was created ( to) in Hollywood by Jon Turteltaub. << On ne peut voir un film qu'après sa création =>> prétérit ! This movie is happening in Jamaica which is a very nice country. I think it's a movie you'll like because it's << it's c'est la contraction de it is et it le pronom sujet neutre >> it talks about sports. During this film there is a reversal that totally changes his life << Ils sont au nombre de 4 = pluriel >> their lives and I find it very funny because they started practising atlétisme athletics before changing in bobslage to bobsleigh. Nouvelle phrase >> It is very comical because at the start they practice a sport of summer sport and at the end they practice a sport of winter sport so whereas they had never saw seen snow before. << le past perfect (plus-que-parfait) pour marquer l'antériorité d'une action passée sur une autre action passée It's a comedy with suspense and action. I'm sure you'll like this movie, it's all you like! Personally I was very happy at the end. Moreover this film had a great success. Finally I really liked that. Tu as intérêt à combler au plus vite tes lacunes en syntaxe anglaise en t'inscrivant sur https://www.anglaisfacile.com/ pour y travailler assidûment tout au long de l'année scolaire. Toutes les ressources de ce site sont absolument gratuites, profites-en. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
Fiona766 Posté(e) le 10 octobre 2019 Auteur Signaler Share Posté(e) le 10 octobre 2019 Merci beaucoup. Je vais m'y inscrire...Je vous promets de faire ainsi des efforts. Bonne journée, Théo. Citer Lien vers le commentaire Partager sur d’autres sites More sharing options...
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