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  1. Fiona766

    Essay

    Bonjour, j'ai demandé à ma professeur d'anglais de m'envoyer des sujets pour améliorer mon anglais écrit. elle m'en enverra mais ne pourra corriger car elle a des réunions pour l'an prochain.. Je vous remercie d'avance pour la correction. Léonie. Le sujet: Tourism has increased so much over the last fifty years that this is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that this is good for Economy. Mon devoir: Go on holidays has become a social value in all modern society, because of the increase of wages in the last 50 years. The development of tourism creates many employments in this sector, like hotel trade, restaurant industry and hobbies. But from another part, the mass tourism provokes housing crisis for local habitants and issues for the environment. Should we prohibit tourism? Eliminate tourism is an excessive solution, and if we want to do it, countries all over the world must work together to prohibit it, but it seems impossible. Indeed, many countries keep their economy safe thanks to tourism: for example, in Greece, the mass tourism is the second resource of money and this sector is the first employer in the country. And with the COVID-19, we can observe the impact of suspension of tourism in the world’s economy. Moreover, if we be beyond the economic setting, tourism is a wealth to learn, visiting historic monuments, museums, and our heritage in general. But we cannot ignore negative impacts of tourism. In Spain, local habitants in summer stations have to move, because rends become excessive. Besides, the environment is not spare: destruction of beaches provokes a lake of biodiversity, and the Mediterranean is more and more contaminate by tourists. Actually, the real solution to keep tourism and the environment safe is to be responsible. Localities must work with professionals of tourism and environmentalists to impose a maximum number of tourists to preserve the environment, and lows to insure habitations for local habitants. The Machu Picchu in Peru has already used this kind of low to protect the Inca’s heritage. No doubt about it that tourism has a real economic power in some countries. But we must understand that it is a danger for local habitants and the environment. Citizens have to be responsible with the mass tourism and thinking their way of travel.
  2. Fiona766

    Décrire sa maison

    Bonjour, Je vous remercie pour cette correction. Je vais m'entrainer sur un livre de grammaire pour les pronoms personnels... Pas facile. ça va rentrer me dit mon frère.. Bonne journée, Honoryne.
  3. Fiona766

    Décrire sa maison

    Bonjour, Je m'appelle Honoryne et suis la soeur de Léonie. Je suis en 4ème et je dois décrire ma maison en faisant un film. consignes: Film and describe your house and garden, explain what you do in each room, give your opinion, share anecdotes, Have fun. Merci pour la correction, Honoryne. My House Honoryne.odt
  4. Fiona766

    Essay

    Bonjour, ça me rassure un peu, merci beaucoup! Bon weekend de Pâques, Léonie.
  5. Fiona766

    Essay

    Bonjour, Merci pour cette correction, c'est vraiment très gentil. Je m'entraîne beaucoup pour l'anglais, un de mes points faibles à l'écrit comme à l'oral! Bonne journée, Léonie.
  6. Fiona766

    Essay

    Bonjour, Je vous envoie le travail que je dois rendre la semaine prochaine. Voici la consigne: Have you ever experienced art online ? The recent events and the outbreak of COVID-19 is has forced many cultural places to imagine new ways of reaching people worldwide. Do you personally consider virtual museums as the future of art, or do you think there is nothing compared to viewing a work of art for real ? Stay home, be safe, Merci pour votre correction, Léonie. Leonie step 3 over to you .docx
  7. Fiona766

    Récit à faire

    Oops! J'ai envoyé l'ébauche..ça n'empêche pas que je pense en français. Comment s'en défaire? je ne sais faire autrement. Ce n'est pas le traducteur, c'était le squelette de mon histoire, entièrement désolée. Je note toujours des mots sans pluriel ni temps, tout comme lorsqu'on écoute un audio et vous avez réceptionné cela. Je vous remercie pour tout, I'm so sorry, Léonie. ça n'empêche que je pense en français! pardon faute ci-dessus
  8. Fiona766

    Récit à faire

    Voici un devoir que j'ai à rendre: celui ci consiste à écrire une petite histoire grâce à des images données et différents documents pour aider à la rédaction. Pourriez-vous corriger les erreurs de syntaxe et/ou d'orthographe? Merci d'avance, Léonie. Le texte est dans un caractère spécial car il faut le rendre dans ce type de caractère: The day is 13th july, my 30th birthday and probably my last. I tell you the story of my life how destroyed my. In my past, I did horrible things that I regret but but I’m convinced that it was not me. Some people are beliveing that I’m crazy. Maybe ? You decide. When I was a child, I lived in a old castle with my parents. This castle has been obscured and dismal. I didn’t like him. As soon as I did much naughtiness, my parents locked my up in a small dark room. They even made planks on the window for that I didn’t look outside. I was cold and afraid because the shade of the planks on the gigantic wall shaped the profil of strange and misterious man. I wept and for to comfort me, I talked myself also I told me small stories. Then, I decided to remove the planks but the share of the strange man were always here and she were more terrifying. For forget this man, every evening, I gazed at the moon. More I looked him, more my head became heavy and a little voice came out in my body. At the beginnig, she reassured me but she started to say me to kill my parents. She told that if I didn’t do that, the share is staying in this room and she is following me. She hassled me every day. My spirit is never being free if I didn’t do that, then, one night,I remember to be wake me up at midnight and go towards my parents’s bedroom one knife in my hand. I have gently opened the door and I have slowly bought me a bit closer of their bed. I have taken my knife and I have sinked him in their head one by one. For hide their body, I have cut them in small pieces and I have buryed them in my neighbour’s garden. After that, I didn’t feel me guilty and that who was realy strange it’s that I have liked kill my parents and I have felt a sort of power in me. I didn’t recognize me. It was like if an ather me spashed up. I even say that this person it is a devil because she have only brought me some evil. When I walked in my garden and that I seen a little insect, I took perverse pleasure in press him.By the bye, the little voice said me that it was very good. I didn’t know if I alawys had a bit of common sens and pleasue on me. I knelt me in front of the evil. More the days passed, more I became bad . The voice hunted me but the man’s share dissepeared. Even if she didn’t is here, I alawys felt her presence. She was somewhere, near me. I became more and more crazy. One day, while I was in my garden, the voice said me to do an horrible thing that I didn’t dare write. At this moment I was shure to have killed the only good part of me. Yes, I kill him ! Several years passed and I became totaly crazy and angry when I didn’t kill enought from person. Kill, it was like a drug for me: more I killed people more I was happy. I liked to sacre the childs. My look terrifyed them. Their were defenceless and anxious in front of me like me in front of the evil. I felt on me something from unusual. All of my hatred that I kept, I went out him. I established the terror everywhere where I went, I felt that people were fear- filled . I was realy obsessed by the kids. I did endure them how I lived. In the drizzle, when one only child walked in a shadowy street, I entertained at scare him with my share how have looked like the stange man’s share in my room. The little voice- how became more tall- congratulated me. Then I tightly took him, the child screaned but he was helpless therefore I began to laugh. After that, I brought him in my cellar where I cut him some small pieces like my parents and I buryed them in the garden of my neighbour. Ah ! that amused a lot. With all of this diseppearances, the police have finished by find the pieces of my victimes and stoped me. Now, I’m in a psychatric hospital for serve my sentence. The little voice recome from time to time. I have needed write this for realize the mistake how I do. I am even saying that I do a deadly mistake because she is costing me my life. I feel my body in decay and I know that I am dieing. Do I deserve the life ?
  9. Fiona766

    Description d'image

    Bonjour, Voici une nouvelle description d'image, nous avons beaucoup de travail à effectuer. Un prochain travail nous sera envoyé la semaine prochaine. Merci d'avance, Léonie. description image 9.docx
  10. Fiona766

    Correction d'un texte

    bonjour et merci pour les corrections. J'ai installé l'application de wordreference. Bonne journée, Raphaël.
  11. Fiona766

    Correction d'un texte

    Bonjour, Voici en Pièce jointe un texte sur le rêve américain. Je n'arrive à trouver de synonymes pour l'expression "It depends on", je le répète souvent dans un paragraphe. Si je me répète, dites le moi. J'ai souvent cette impression. Merci pour votre correction, Raphaël. Myths and heroes Raphael.docx
  12. Fiona766

    Correction fautes orthographe

    Merci beaucoup pour la correction, je suis en train de le remanier. J'ai l’impression d'énumérer et non d'expliquer correctement. Je renverrai ma copie dès que je serai plus satisfait de moi. encore merci et bonne journée. Raphaël.
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    Correction fautes orthographe

    Bonjour, J'ai retapé tout mon texte pour plus de lisibilité. J'ai peur de m'être égaré sur sur une notion. Je n'ai pas vraiment eu de conseils pour la rédaction de ce type de devoir. Je vous remercie d'avance, Raphaël. Places forms of power Raphael.docx
  14. Bonjour Monsieur, Vous trouverez ci-joint deux pièces jointes (numérisation de ma notion Places and forms of power). Si celle-ci est illisible ou difficile pour vous à relire, malheureusement j'avais écrit en bleu. Mon .doc a été perdu sur mon ordinateur, si vous préférez que je retape tout , je le ferai dès demain. Je vous remercie d'avance et passerai demain chez mes voisins pour connaître votre réponse. Bonne soirée, raphaël.
  15. Merci beaucoup Oui je vais réviser mes points faibles, lorsque je fais un exercice c'est bon mais l'utilisation spontanée est difficile... Bonne soirée Monsieur. Léonie
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