Biopic

[Fiona766]

Bonjour,

je dois décrire un bilm biopic et inciter un ami à aller le voir. Voici mon essai:

Merci d'avance pour vos corrections et conseils. Théo.

Biopic : Rasta Rocket

You must (to) go to the cinema to see a bopic. (Who) which is entitled Rasta Rocket.
(He) it is created( to) in Holliwood by Jon Turteltaub.

This movie is happening in Jamaica which is a very nice country.

I think it's a movie you'll like because it's talk about sports. During this film there is a reversal that totally changes his life and I find it very funny because they practice atlétisme to change in bobslage, it is very comical because at the start they practice a sport of summer and at the end they practice a sport of winter so they never saw snow before.

It's a comedy with suspense and action. I'm sure you'll like this movie, it's all you like! Personally I was very happy at the end. Moreover this film had a great success.

Finally I really liked that.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Biopic: Rasta Rockett

You must (to) << Un auxiliaire modal doit toujours être suivi d'un infinitif sans to >> go to the cinema to watch/see a biopic (Who) << who ne s'emploie que pour un antécédent de personne  which is entitled Rasta Rocket.
(He) << Révise l'emploi des pronoms sujet, il y a urgence ! >> It is was created ( to) in Hollywood by Jon Turteltaub. << On ne peut voir un film qu'après sa création =>> prétérit !

This movie is happening in Jamaica which is a very nice country.

I think it's a movie you'll like because it's << it's c'est la contraction de it is et it le pronom sujet neutre >> it talks about sports. During this film there is a reversal that totally changes his life << Ils sont au nombre de 4 = pluriel >> their lives and I find it very funny because they started practising atlétisme athletics before changing in bobslage to bobsleigh. Nouvelle phrase >> It is very comical because at the start they practice a sport of summer sport and at the end they practice a sport of winter sport so whereas they had never saw seen snow before. << le past perfect (plus-que-parfait) pour marquer l'antériorité d'une action passée sur une autre action passée

It's a comedy with suspense and action. I'm sure you'll like this movie, it's all you like! Personally I was very happy at the end. Moreover this film had a great success.

Finally I really liked that.

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[Fiona766]

Merci beaucoup.

Je vais m'y inscrire...Je vous promets de faire ainsi des efforts.

Bonne journée, Théo.