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[roby67]

bonjour pourriez vous me corriger ce texte merci

The bully talks offensive remark, everybody ignore her and everybody insulted her. Alison didn't go to school because of that

If she had asked to change their school she would be alive

If Laura has talked to a teacher she would not have committed suicide ant the culprit would be punisher today

If Laura talked the polite the culprit should be punished today

[yveslouis]

bonjour pourriez-vous me corriger ce texte merci

The bully talks offensive remarkv, everybody ignorev her and everybody insulted (Quel est le temps des deux verbes ? Faut-il mettre "talks" au même temps ?) her. Alison didn't go to school because of that

If she had asked to change their school she would be alive v.

If Laura has talked to a teacher she would not have committed suicide ant the culprit would be punisher today

If Laura v talked v the polite the culprit should be punished today

[Jean B]

Serait-ce trop demander que faire preuve d'un minimum de bon sens, c'est-à-dire donner l'énoncé précis de l'exercice ?