Animals

[Fiona766]

Bonjour,

Stanislas doit faire un texte en cinquante sur les animaux. Pourriez-vous le corriger s'il vous plaît. (Il m'a dit qu'il n'était pas inspiré). Merci pour lui. Fiona.

First I like animals especially pets. But I wouldn't prefer to have pets because I'm allergic and also we are too much clse to them, generally we become attached to them.

However I prefer dogs because they are smart and live dayly with us. Moreover dogs understand better than cats. They obey us, whereas a cat doesn't understand all (for example: sit down! stand up).

To conclude, animals are very confident. We can talk to them, they never repeat a word. It is well known that animals are human's best friends.

[amandinehelps]

Bonjour,

Stanislas doit faire un texte en cinquante sur les animaux. Pourriez-vous le corriger s'il vous plaît. (Il m'a dit qu'il n'était pas inspiré). Merci pour lui. Fiona.

First I like animals especially pets. But I wouldn't prefer to have pets because I'm allergic and also we are too much clse to them, generally we become attached to them.

However I prefer dogs because they are smart and live dayly with us. Moreover dogs understand better than cats. They obey us, whereas a cat doesn't understand all (for example: sit down! stand up).

To conclude, animals are very confident. We can talk to them, they never repeat a word. It is well known that animals are human's best friends.

[Fiona766]

Bonjour Madame ou Monsieur,

Stanislas est en sixième Européenne. Je vous remercie pour lui. Bonne journée Fiona et Stanislas..

Bonjours Fiona, je ne sais pas en quel classe se trouve Stanislas donc quel niveau de langue il doit employer mais je vais corriger au mieux ses quelques fautes et maladresses. Globalement le texte est tres bien, sans fautes de grammaire mais la deuxieme phrase est maladroite:

But I would not like to have pets because I am allergic. Besides, we can be really close to them and generally we become attached to them.

However I prefer dogs... la suite du texte est tres correcte!

[Jean B]

Bonjour Stan,

Bonjour,

Stanislas doit faire un texte en cinquante mots sur les animaux. Pourriez-vous le corriger s'il vous plaît ? (Il m'a dit qu'il n'était pas inspiré). Merci pour lui. Fiona.

First I like animals especially pets. But I would<n't prefer to> rather not have pets because I'm allergic and also we are too <much> close to them, generally we become attached to them.

However I prefer dogs because they are smart and live dayly with us. Moreover dogs understand better than cats. They obey us, whereas a cat doesn't understand all (for example: sit down! stand up).

To conclude, animals are very confident. We can talk to them, they never repeat a word. It is well known that animals are <human> man's best friends.

[Fiona766]

Bonjour Monsieur,

Je vais lui montrer tout à l'heure votre correction. Merci pour Stan, Fiona.

Bonjour Stan,

C'est du bon travail, bravo.