Devoir: Mail à Une Jeune Fille

[Fiona766]

Bonjour,

Mon petit frère Stan, a un devoir: il devra le présenter sous forme de mail : une jeune fille envoie un message à son amie pour lui raconter la pièce de théâtre dans laquelle elle a joué. Merci pour lui. Fiona

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Object : my play

At the beginning we had to choose our roles. I wanted to be Juliett. Ben declared that it was sure that Jake wanted to be Roméo. Ben did not stop saying that Jake was romantic, that he read romantic books and wrote romantic poems ; to defend himself Jake said he played a lot of video games.

About roles

Ben was Mercutio ( Romeo’s friend )

Jake was Romeo and I was Juliett

About costumes

We were complicated. I said that I could not run because my dress was too long. The trousers on Ben was too broad. The jacket of Jack was too much gripped.

Suddenly, the telephone rang

Mrs Mason asked to whom belonged this telephone. I said that it was mine. It was my father ; he asked me if he upset in my repetition. I said to him that not. I was happy because it came for my play and I cried of joy.

About the show

I was going to kill myself by saying O’ happyclagger. When a lady said I can’t watch that. Some audience said hush. The lady asked for forgiveness but for her the play was really stimulating. My mother said to my father she has to take a photograph. I accepted a lot of compliments and applause.

Conclusion

We had a lot of success and we are in the newspaper.

BY BY

[Jean B]

Bonjour Stan,

Bonjour,

Mon petit frère Stan, a un devoir: il devra le présenter sous forme de mail : une jeune fille envoie un message à son amie pour lui raconter la pièce de théâtre dans laquelle elle a joué. Merci pour lui. Fiona

From to

Object : my play

At the beginning we had to choose our roles. I wanted to be Juliett. Ben declared he was sure that Jake wanted to be Romeo. Ben kept on saying that Jake was romantic, that he read romantic books and wrote romantic poems ; to defend himself Jake said he played a lot of video games.

About roles

Ben was Mercutio ( Romeo’s friend )

Jake was Romeo and I was Juliet

About costumes

They<(?) were complicated. I said that I could not run because my dress was too long. Ben's trousers were too broad. The jacket of Jack was too tight.

Suddenly, a telephone rang

Mrs Mason asked whose telephone it was. I said that it was mine. It was my father ; he asked me if he was interfering with my rehearsal. I told him he wasn't. I was happy because he came for my play and I cried with joy.

About the show

I was going to kill myself while saying "O’ happy dagger". When a lady said "I can’t watch that". Some people in the audience said hush. The lady apologized but for her the play was really exciting. My mother told my father she had to take a photograph. I received a lot of congratulations and applause.

Conclusion

We had a lot of success and we were in the newspaper.

Bye bye

[Fiona766]

Bonjour Monsieur,

Stan est au lit, je lui ai recopié son devoir et reste avec lui, je n'ai pas de cours ce matin.

Ce serait bien effectivement que vous expliquiez ses fautes, enfin plutôt vos corrections par rapport à ses erreurs. (En ce qui me concerne je préfère savoir pour comprendre et ne plus refaire les mêmes fautes). C'est très gentil de votre part.

Merci d'avance pour lui. Fiona.

[Jean B]

Bonjour Monsieur,

Stan est au lit, je lui ai recopié son devoir et reste avec lui, je n'ai pas de cours ce matin.

Ce serait bien effectivement que vous expliquiez ses fautes, enfin plutôt vos corrections par rapport à ses erreurs. (En ce qui me concerne je préfère savoir pour comprendre et ne plus refaire les mêmes fautes). C'est très gentil de votre part.

Merci d'avance pour lui. Fiona.