What Did I Do Last Week?

[Fiona766]

Bonjour,

Je tente de commenter mon weekend, l'heure est au révision, finies les vacances.

Je commence, Voilà mon texte:

(Si vous pensez à d'autres formules, n'hésitez pas) Merci Fiona.

On Saturday, I went to visit an exhibition about Dally. There were some lithographs that came from water-color and that illustrated the Tristan and Iseus story.

On the afternoon I played a tennis game with a friend, just before going and seeing my mother at her home.

On Sunday morning I did a footrace of twelve kilometres near Paris.

The afternoon, I played a bit with the “Wii” play station and finished the last novel of Dianel Picouly which titled “68 , mon amour”. This book tell us the 29 May 1968 day, when the Général De Gaulle ran away to Baden baden before decided to go back in France. I didn't know this story.

It was a fabulous weekend.

[Jean B]

Bonjour Fiona,

Sage décision que la tienne.

Sois plus attentive à ce que tu écris et re-mobilise tes connaissances.

Bon courage.

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Bonjour,

Je tente de commenter mon weekend, l'heure est aux révisions, <(en français aussi ? ) finies les vacances.

Je commence, Voilà mon texte:

(Si vous pensez à d'autres formules, n'hésitez pas) Merci Fiona.

On Saturday, I went to visit an exhibition about Dali. There were some lithographs that came from water-color and that illustrated the Tristan and Iseult / Isolde / story.

In the afternoon I played a tennis game with a friend, just before going to my mother's and paying her a visit.<(la course à pied = running - difficile de ne pas employer la préposition to avec un verbe de mouvement. To pay someone a visit / to visit someone = rendre visite à qqn)

On Sunday morning I did a twelve-kilometre's running near Paris.<(la course à pied = running - cas possessif possible avec les expressions de temps, distance, durée)

In the afternoon, I played a little with the "Wii" play station and finished the latest<(= le dernier en date, le dernier paru. /uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif">/uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif">/uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif">/uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif">/uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif">http://www.e-bahut.com/uploads/emoticons/default_inferieur.gif' alt='<='>> last = le dernier de tous, celui après lequel il ne peut pas y en avoird'autre) novel by Daniel Picouly entitled "68 , mon amour". This book tells us about the 29th May, 1968 when General De Gaulle<(jamais de déterminant devant un nom propre précédé d'un titre ou d'un grade et pas d'accent en anglais) ran away to Baden baden before deciding<( v-ing après une préposition mais jamais de base verbale) to go back to France. I didn't know this story.

It was a fabulous weekend.

[Fiona766]

Bonsoir,

Je vous remercie. Effectivement le français est aussi à revoir

Merci de votre correction. Fiona.

Bonjour Fiona,

Sage décision que la tienne.

Sois plus attentive à ce que tu écris et re-mobilise tes connaissances.

Bon courage.

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