Ruben97115

Merci beaucoup, je tâcherai de ne plus répéter ces fautes.

Bonjour je suis en DUT GEA, soit BAC +2. On m'a demandé de réaliser une vidéo de candidature en anglais bien sur. J'aimerai avoir la correction de quelqu'un qui s'y connait bien dans le langage professionnel en Anglais. Je sais qu'il y a des termes à ne pas utiliser et qui sont en réalité des fautes récurrentes. Je suis ouvert à toutes suggestions et corrections. En vous remerciant par avance. Ci dessous mon script : VIDEO APPLICATION Hello, my name is R... C... and I am 19 years old. I have a Bachelor's degree in Economics and Social Sciences, specializing in Social and Political Sciences, ab. Currently, I am training at the University Institute of Technology: a University Degree in Technology in Business and Administration Management, option : Management of Organizations. Profesional experiences. In September 2017, I participated in a competition to create a fictitious company, of which I still serve as "President". This allowed me to learn to lead, inform, delegate and above all to organize myself. Then in January 2019, I was an intern for a month at The Agricultural Credit in Luynes. I have had the opportunity to carry out independent missions, to take over the counter and the operations attached to it and to control loan files. Currently, I am a sales partner at Carrefour SPDC since June 2019. I manage the return goods of the culture sector. I also help clients navigate the shelves to find books, video games, music and movies. Skills I master office software such as: word, powerpoint, excel, publisher. In addition, I use Photoshop professional version and sky business management. Language levels: My English and Spanish are intermediate. Extra-curricular I have been cycling, canoeing and I have been passionate about aquariums for 4 years. Personality Dynamic, punctual and rigorous are qualities that I have developed throughout my schooling. Key achievement I set up a lighthouse renovation service within my father's professional activity. This service increased sales by 5%.