Past perfect

[roby67]

Bonjour dans ce texte il faut que j'utilise le past perfect et le simple past. <L'adjectif DEVANT le nom !

Pourriez vous me corriger le phrases merci d'avance

When I was child I had been lived in London for six years. My house was in Oxford Street near the British Museum.

I was go in the French School Jacques prévert. It was very à lovely School. This School is located in west London.

This school welcomes around 260 pupils.. When I graduated I have come back to France and I have continued my studies of marketing. when I was thirty i worked in  elf company.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Il y a 1 heure, roby67 a dit :

When I was a child I had been lived <(1) in London for six years. My house was in Oxford Street near the British Museum.

(1) Tu n'es plus une enfant quand tu écris cela, c'est donc un passé révolu, terminé, coupé du présent et daté pour toi = simple past.

I was go in attending <(2) the French School Jacques prévert. It was very a very lovely School. This School is located in west London. (2) to attend = fréquenter. Le simple past continu se compose de l'auxiliaire was/were et d'un verbe en -ing

This school welcomes around 260 pupils. When I graduated I have come came <(3)  back to France and I have continued <(3) my studies of in marketing / I kept on <(3) studying marketing. When I was thirty I <(4) worked in  for the Elf company.

(3) Ces 3 verbes font encore référence à des moments de ta vie complètement révolus et coupés du moment présent = simple past.

(4) Le pronom sujet de la 1ère personne du singulier ne s'écrit qu'avec le I MAJUSCULE !

Révise ta leçon, tu n'en as pas retenu le principe.

 

[roby67]

I had just graduated that Elf contacted for me a job.

est ce que l'emploi du past perfect est juste dans cette phrase

[Jean B]

Il y a 17 heures, roby67 a dit :

I had just graduated that when Elf contacted me for a job.

est ce que l'emploi du past perfect est juste dans cette phrase < Oui ! ?Tu as juste commis une erreur sur le pronom relatif à employer.