Imagine an episode of a vampire's life

[Bourbon]

Hello 

Can you correct my work please?

Frank was a vampire. Every night, he set a trap for people who entered in his sinister castle. One day, a young man who was called Bryan, got into the castle. He was crazy about terrifying experiences. When he arrived in Frank's room, the vampire leapt. Bryan was scared. Frank bit his neck with his long fangs and he sucked his blood. He drunk all of Bryan's blood. Next, he took his body and he put it down in front of the castle's door. Maybe was he dead? Finally, he woke up when the sun set. Frank went into his coffin, really proud to have made a new victim, to sleep until the next sunset.

 

[Jean B]

Good evening,

Congratulations on your good English!

There's just one mistake you must correct this way: " ... in front of the castle door". << You can only use a compound noun but certainly not the possessive case.

Regarding the last sentence, I would write it this way: Frank went back into his coffin so as to sleep until the next sunset, really proud to have made a new victim.

All the best!