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[merci1200]

The tuition fees in increased during the years 2000-2011.This increased reinforces incimpatibily with the American dream; but why?
 
To begin with , I'll say that the American dream is characterized by the idea of an America full of promises an very attravtive.It lets people think that anybody leving in America,thanks to courage,work and determination,can succeed.People can start from scratch and make fortunes.
Oprah Winfrey demonstrated that the American dream was a reality.However,it is often called into question.
The tuiton fees shows this questioning.The students during their education brrow the money to bank.The student dets are high and,often it is necessary severai years for to pay off their debts (20 years).Moreover the tuiyion debt vary according to milieu :14000$ yearly in the public university and 26000$ in the private university
To conclude, I'll simply say that the American Dream is incompatible with the student debts. Actually, The American Dream is has always been a successful life from scratch and not have debts to repay until the end of his life and are not sure to succeed his life
 

[yveslouis]

Il y a 1 heure, merci1200 a dit :

The tuition fees in have increased during the years 2000-2011.This increased reinforces incimpatibily with the American dream; but why?
 
To begin with , I'll say that the American dream is characterized by the idea of an America full of promises an very attravtive. It lets people think that anybody leving in America, thanks to courage, work and determination, can succeed. People can start from scratch and make fortunes.
Oprah Winfrey demonstrated that the American dream was a reality. However, it is often called into question.
The tuiton fees shows this questioning. The students during their education borrow the money to bank. The student dets are high and, often, it is necessary it takes severai years for to pay off their debts (20 years). Moreover the tuiyion debt vary according to milieu :14 000$ yearly in the public university and 26_000$ in the private university
To conclude, I'll simply say that the American Dream is incompatible with the student debts. Actually, The American Dream is has always been a successful life from scratch and not have debts to repay until the end of his life and are not sure to succeed his life Woah! Quelle fin de phrase !!! Essaie de remettre ça d'aplomb !
 

 

[merci1200]

 Tuition fees have increased during the years 2000-2011.This increase reinforces incompatibly with the American dream; but why?
 To begin with, I'll say that the American dream is characterized by the idea of an America full of promises a very attractive. It lets people think that anybody living in America, thanks to courage, work and determination, can succeed. People can start from scratch and make fortunes.
Oprah Winfrey demonstrated that the American dream was a reality. However, it is often called into question.
Tuition fees show this questioning. The students during their education borrow money bank. The student debts are high and, often, it is necessary it takes a lot of years pay off their debts (20 years). Moreover the tuition debts vary according to milieu: 14 000$ yearly in public universities and 26_000$ in private universities
To conclude, I'll simply say that the American Dream is incompatible with the student debts. Actually, The American Dream is has  not have debts to repay until the end of his life and are not sure to succeed his life always been a successful life from scratch and 

merci mais pour la dernière phrase je c pas