roby67 Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2015 Signaler Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2015 bonjour pouvez vous me corriger ce texte merci He was born on the 12 August 1954 He is 61 years old He was been president may 15 2012 He lives in France, but he was born in Moscou He is separated with Segole Royale He has several children. They called Julian Thomas Flora and Clémence He is a little clumsy but it is a very hard working. He has black hair brown eyes and he is on meter seventy five tall. He has a brother, her name is Philippe Hollande
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 15 octobre 2015 Bonsoir, He was born on the 12 August 12th, 1954 < Faute déjà corrigée précédemment. Si tu ne tiens pas compte de mes annotations, je cesserai mon aide car je n'ai pas vocation à prêcher dans le désert. Tiens-le toi pour dit. He is 61 years old. He was has been a president since May 15th, 2012. < present perfect = has/have + participe passé. Révise ta grammaire ! Majuscule à tous les noms des mois. He lives in France but he was born in Moscow. He is has separated with from Segolène Royal. < le present perfect encore He has several children. They are called/Their names are/ Julian, Thomas, Flora and Clémence. He is a little clumsy but it he is a very hard working.< Il y a 3 pronoms sujet de la 3ème personne singulier. Révise ta grammaire, bis ! He has black hair, brown eyes and he is one meter seventy five tall. He has a brother, her his name is Philippe Hollande. < l'adjectif possessif s'accorde en genre avec le possesseur. Révise ta grammaire, ter !
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