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[roby67]

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Her name is Angelina Jolie

She is an actress
She has black hair, blue eyes and measuring 1 meter 75Angelina Jolie (born Angelina Jolie Voight) was born in Los Angeles the 4 June 1975.
She enjoys playing the drums and snakes lazars
it involved in many charities
she has been has United Nations ambassador since 2001
she likes to learn to speak French and French cook recipes.Divorced from actors Jonny Lee Miller and Billy Bob Thornton, Angelina Jolie lives currently with actor Brad Pitt and she engaged in April 2012. They were married the 23 August 2014 in France. The couple adopted three children: Maddox Chivan (2001), Pax Thien (2003) and Zahara Marley (2005), and had three biological children: Shiloh Nouvel (2006), Vivienne Marcheline and Knox Leon (2008).

 

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Her name is Angelina Jolie

She is an actress.
She has black hair, blue eyes and measuring is 1 meter 75 tall. Angelina Jolie (born Angelina Jolie Voight) was born in Los Angeles the 4 on June 4th 1975.< préposition "on" devant une date précise.
She enjoys playing the drums and snakes lazars <???
it She is involved in many charities. She has been has a United Nations ambassador since 2001. < Une phrase commence obligatoirement par une majuscule et se termine par un point.
She likes to learn to speak French and French cook French recipes. Divorced from actors Johnny Lee Miller and Billy Bob Thornton, Angelina Jolie lives currently with actor Brad Pitt and she got engaged in April 2012. They were married the 23 on August 23rd 2014 in France. The couple adopted three children: Maddox Chivan (2001), Pax Thien (2003) and Zahara Marley (2005), and had three biological children: Shiloh Nouvel (2006), Vivienne Marcheline and Knox Leon (2008).

C'est nettement mieux que précédemment. Serais-tu en progrès ?

 

[roby67]

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