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[Céline5962]

Bonjour,

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Nowadays an athletes can't train without a doctor. They work with an psychologists and an nutritionists. Most athletes use an drugs but an drugs they use are strictly controlled by a doctors who look after them.

I once met a athlete who said to me : "the victory means a hard work. All you need is a luck and (rien) awful lot of training". He was strongly opposed to (rien) use of an drugs. 

He used to say that (rien) victory he had won over his competitors at the Olympics was a result of a hard work and a strong discipline. Strangely enough, he has now become a biologist and works seven days (rien) week in a laboratory experimenting a new substances for an athletes.

 

Merci d'avance; 

[yveslouis]

Bonjour,

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Nowadays an athletes can't train without a doctor. They work with an psychologists and an nutritionists. Most athletes use an drugs but an drugs (déterminé par la relative) they use are strictly controlled by a doctors (déterminé par la relative) who look after them.

I once met a athlete (commence par un son voyelle) who said to me : "the victory means a hard work. All you need is a luck and (rien) awful lot of training" (connais-tu l'expression "a lot of..."?)  . He was strongly opposed to (rien) use ( "use" est déterminé) of an drugs. 

He used to say that (rien) victory (la victoire est déterminée par la relative)  he had won over his competitors at the Olympics was a result (le résultat est terminé : "the") of a hard work and a strong discipline. Strangely enough, he has now become a biologist and works seven days (rien) (par jour/semaine/mois : "a -") week in a laboratory experimenting a new substances for an athletes.

 

Merci d'avance; 

 

"a/an" devant un nom dénombrable singulier ["an" devant un son voyelle]

"the" devant un nom déterminé (par un adjectif, une relative...) [l'emploi de "the" est très difficile à maîtriser]

∅ (= rien) devant un nom pluriel ou non déterminé.

[Céline5962]

Bonjour,

Merci pour votre réponses,

est-ce bon ? 

Nowadays the athletes can't train without a doctor. They work with a psychologists and a nutritionists. Most athletes use a drugs but a drugs they use are strictly controlled by doctors who look after them.

I once met an athlete who said to me : "a victory means hard work. All you need is an luck and an awful lot of training". He was strongly opposed to use of a drugs. 

He used to say that a victory  he had won over his competitors at the Olympics was the result of a hard work and a strong discipline. Strangely enough, he has now become a biologist and works seven days a week in a laboratory experimenting new substances for the athletes.

Merci d'avance;