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je dois faire le guide à New york

je dois utiliser le prétérit en plaçant le anymore ou not any more use to au maximum

pouvez-vous me corriger ce texte

Hello

Good Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city who is divided into any more five districts Brooklyn, Queens, Manathan, Bronx, state Island. Manathan has got 1626159 inhabitants. We were visiting many monuments. The twin tower used to be the most beautiful tower in New york city. Al quaida terrorist hijacked planes and crashed them the 9/11. Killing everyone on abord and lots of other people working in the building.

The Statue of Liberty (Statue of Liberty) is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the statue in the United States on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886.

In the central parks is a fountain. Bethesda Fountain (in English, Bethesda Fountain) is at the center of the Bethesda Terrace in Central Park, New York. . The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

je dois faire le guide à New york

je dois utiliser le prétérit en plaçant le anymore ou not any more use to au maximum

pouvez-vous me corriger ce texte

Hello

Good Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city who which is divided into any more five districts: Brooklyn, Queens, Manhathan, Bronx, Staten Island. Manathan has got 1626159 inhabitants. We were visiting <??? many monuments. The twin towers used to be the most beautiful towers in New york city. <Il y en avait 2 = pluriel Al quaida terrorists hijacked planes and crashed them into the towers the on 9/11, <préposition 'on' devant une date précise killing everyone<Non, tout de même pas et heureusement Tu t'es mal renseignée on abord in the surrounding area and lots of other people working in the buildings.

The Statue of Liberty (Statue of Liberty) is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the United States the statue on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886.

In the Central Park there is a fountain. Bethesda Fountain (in English, Bethesda Fountain) is at in the center of the Bethesda Terrace in Central Park, New York. The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.

[roby67]

bonjour j'ai changé le texte si quelqu'un peut me le corriger

Hello

Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city which is divided in to five districts: Brooklyn, Queens, Manhathan, Bronx, and Staten Island. Manathan has got 1626159 inhabitants.. The twin towers used to be the most beautiful towers in New York City. Al quaida terrorists hijacked planes and crashed them into the towers on 9/11. Killing every one on board and lots other people working in the building. Many firefighters were killed that day death.

The Statue of Liberty (Statue of Liberty) is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the United States the statue on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886.It is standing on the island of Liberty Island south of Manhattan. The bronze statue of 46 meters high was the work of sculptor Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and engineer Gustave Eiffel French and industrial.

In Central Park there is Bethesda Fountain in the center of Bethesda Terrace. The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.

[roby67]

Hello

Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city which is divided in to five districts: Brooklyn, Queens, Manhathan, Bronx, and Staten Island. Manathan has got 1626159 inhabitants.. The twin towers used to be the most beautiful towers in New York City. Al quaida terrorists hijacked planes and crashed them into the towers on 9/11. Killing every one on board and lots other people working in the building. Many firefighters were killed that day death.

The Statue of Liberty (Statue of Liberty) is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the United States the statue on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886.It is standing on the island of Liberty Island south of Manhattan. The bronze statue of 46 meters high was the work of sculptor Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and engineer Gustave Eiffel French and industrial.

In Central Park there is Bethesda Fountain in the center of Bethesda Terrace. The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.

[Jean B]

Tu pourrais au moins avoir la décence d'accuser réception de ma correction avant d'en faire un simple copié-collé !

[roby67]

Tu pourrais au moins avoir la décence d'accuser réception de ma correction avant d'en faire un simple copié-collé !

[roby67]

The famous angel blessed the Pool of Bethesda, and she was giving healing powers

l'ange bénit la piscine de Betesda et elle donne des pouvoirs de guérison

[roby67]

j'ai refait un este en anglais

pourriez vous me corriger je pense qu'il y a encore des fautes

il faut utiliser le prétérit

Hello

Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city who is divided into five districts ^ Brooklyn, Queens, Manathan, Bronx, state Island. Manathan has 1 626 159 inhabitants.. The twin towers used to be the most beautiful tower and they towers was used to turn movies like King Kong and Spiderman. Al Qaida terrorist hijacked planes and crashed them the 9/11 .The people on board were Killed and lots of other people were working in the buildings. Many firefighters were died that day.

The Statue of Liberty is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the statue in the United States on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886. The bronze statue of 46 meters high was the work of sculptor Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and engineer Gustave Eiffel French and industrial.

Bethesda Fountain is at the center of the Bethesda Terrace in Central Park. The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.The famous angel blessed the Pool of Bethesda, and she was giving healing powers (pouvoir de guérison)

[Jean B]

The famous angel blessed blesses the Pool of Bethesda pool and she was giving supplies healing powers

l'ange bénit la piscine de Betesda et elle donne des pouvoirs de guérison

[Jean B]

j'ai refait un este en anglais

pourriez vous me corriger je pense qu'il y a encore des fautes

il faut utiliser le prétérit

Hello

Welcome to New York

New York is a fantastic city who is divided into five districts Brooklyn, Queens, Manathan, Bronx, state Island. Manathan has 1 626 159 inhabitants.. The twin towers used to be the most beautiful tower and they towers was used to turn movies like King Kong and Spiderman. Al Qaida terrorist hijacked planes and crashed them the 9/11 .The people on board were Killed and lots of other people were working in the buildings. Many firefighters were died that day.

The Statue of Liberty is the symbol of political freedom and democracy.. France offered the statue in the United States on the occasion of the commemoration of the centennial of the American Revolution. The Statue of Liberty was opened to the public in 1886. The bronze statue of 46 meters high was the work of sculptor Frederic Auguste Bartholdi and engineer Gustave Eiffel French and industrial.

Bethesda Fountain is at the center of the Bethesda Terrace in Central Park. The four cherubs represent the virtues of temperance, purity, prosperity and peace.The famous angel blessed the Pool of Bethesda, and she was giving healing powers (pouvoir de guérison)