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[roby67]

Bonjour Est ce que vous pouvez me corriger ces phrases

Laura didn't want to go school because of violence,verbal and physical and

It was offensive remarks and she was ignored by everyone

If she asked to change her middle school, she would be alive. Laura didn't go to school because she suffered of punch and spit.

If she talked to the teacher, she would never commit suicide and the culprit will be punished today. Laura didn't go to school because of that. If Laura talked the polite the culprits should be punished today.

If Laura has talked to a teacher she would not commit suicide.

[Ezehkiel Jones]

Hello' ! Elle est pas drôle cette histoire en tout cas...

Voilà:

Laura didn't want to go to school because of the verbal and physical violence.

There were offensive remarks and everyone ignored her.

If she had changed school, she would be alive now. Laura didn't go to school because she used to get punched and spit on.

If she had talked to the teacher and the police, she would never have commit suicide and the culprit (pourquoi pas, mais un peu maladroit) would be punished today. Laura didn't go to school because of that.

"If Laura talked the polite the culprits should be punished today" (que voulais-tu dire ? Si elle avait parlé à la police ? Si c'est le cas, autant le rajouter dans la phrase précédente pour éviter de se répéter. Ce que j'ai fait.)

If Laura had talked to a teacher she would'nt have commit suicide (tu l'as déjà dis !)

Espérant t'avoir aidé,

Best regards,

[Ezehkiel Jones]

Oh, j'ai laissé une grosse erreur... "she would never have committed suicide"