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[askk]

Bonjour, pouvez vous me donner un coup de main pour corriger mes erreur de grammaire, ect ?

Je dois faire la description de cette image:

On this poster entitled American WAY we see a car in which is a family of 4 people and a dog. We find that this family is happy because they make a big smile.

This afiche dates 1950 because the car as well as the clotes of the people move in this direction(ces deux arguments vont dans ce sens). This family represents an ideal family property of American dream because everything is perfect, and we conclude that it is a stereotype, because there is an exaggeration of the American model.

Merci beaucoup ..

[yveslouis]

Bonjour, pouvez vous me donner un coup de main pour corriger mes erreur de grammaire, ect ?

Je dois faire la description de cette image:

On this poster entitled American WAY (virgule avant et après) we see a car in which THERE is a family of 4 people and a dog. We find that (inutile) this family is happy because they make a big smile. (On n'est pas heureux parce qu'on sourit mais on sourit parce qu'on est heureux)

This afiche dates BACK TO 1950 because the car as well as the clotes of the people move in this direction (revoir la formulation) (ces deux arguments vont dans ce sens). This family represents an ideal family property (quel sens donnes-tu à ce mot ?) of American dream because everything is perfect, and we conclude that it is a stereotype, because there is an exaggeration of the American model.

Merci beaucoup ..

[askk]

Merci

On this poster, entitled American WAY, we see a car in which there is a family of 4 people and a dog. They make a big smile because there are happy

This poster datesback to 1950 because the car as well as the clotes of the people move in this direction (ces deux arguments vont dans ce sens). This family represents an ideal family of American dream because everything is perfect, and we conclude that it is a stereotype, because there is an exaggeration of the American model.

je ne vois pas comment traduire l'ensemble que j'ai souligné en rouge.. est ce que vous pouvez m'aider ?

merci

[Ezehkiel Jones]

Hello' !

Voilà une proposition: "This poster dates back to 1950 (si tu n'es pas certain de la date, serait-il peut-être plus judicieux d'écrire "to the 1950's" ?) because the car and the people's clothing seem from this era/epoch/time (les 3 conviennent)."

Kindest regards,