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[Lily009]

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir à rendre pour mardi, j'aimerai avoir votre aide, pour savoir si j'ai bien utilisé le Present perfect et le Simple past,

Voilà, en vous remerciant d'avance

Dear Mary,

How have you been since all this time ?

I have many things to tell you, Do you remember when in class, I spoke to you about the contest in Redondo Beach ?

Two weeks ago, a had a phone message saying the girl who won the contest was disqualified,

So... I am going to participate in the contest! : I'ts Fantastic!

But it's a rough way...

Uncle Frank cames at home, he wanted to kill himself.

Dwayne doesn't spoken.

Grandpa, since few months, help me to learnt some steps of dance.

Daddy said to me : "Are you gonne win ? If you don't know, you're a looser!"

Now, i'm affraid to lose...

We were taken the bus,

Me, i listened music with my walkman, during : Frank, Dad, Mum, and Grandpa spoke about Politik (it's boring)

But infortunately, the bus have fallen in breakdown! Henceforth, we must push the bus, until that Dad sais :"Come in! Quickly!"

During a break in a service station, I went to revise me steps, maybee ten minutes later, i went back on me feet, in front of the shop,

The bus were lost! I stayed here... I knew that they will come back to find me.

The bus were arrived! They shouted, and, I understood that i had to run very fast into the bus.

The night we were slept in a motel, i divided my room with Grandpa, we were spoken, and after that i Slept.

When i woke up, I called him, he doesn't moved!

I don't remember any more the continuation, I was very tired.

Only about the hospital, a doctor cames, he said that Grandpa wouldn't return.

I hope he's between a goods hands into the sky...

I will tell you the next, an other day,

Big kiss for you Mary,

Your friend Olive.

Bye.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir à rendre pour mardi, j'aimerais avoir votre aide pour savoir si j'ai bien utilisé le Present perfect et le Simple past,

Voilà, en vous remerciant d'avance

Dear Mary,

How have you been since all this time ?

I have many things to tell you, Do you remember when in class, I spoke to you about the contest in Redondo Beach ?

Two weeks ago, a had a phone message saying the girl who won the contest was disqualified,

So... I am going to participate in the contest! : I'ts Fantastic!

But it's a rough way...

[Lily009]

Bonjour,

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir à rendre pour mardi, j'aimerais avoir votre aide pour savoir si j'ai bien utilisé le Present perfect et le Simple past,

Voilà, en vous remerciant d'avance

Dear Mary,

How have you been since all this time ?

I have many things to tell you, Do you remember when in class, I spoke to you about the contest in Redondo Beach ?

Two weeks ago, a had a phone message saying the girl who won the contest was disqualified,

So... I am going to participate in the contest! : I'ts Fantastic!

But it's a rough way...

[Jean B]

Bien sur Mon devoir a été corrigé par une sainte personne qui a eu l'aimable gentillesse de le reprendre une seconde fois,

Et je l'en remercie, Si elle avait pu elle aussi voir que j'avais mentionné "A partir de ce moment là, je bloque pour l'utilisation de ces temps".

Elle aurait au moins dû comprendre qu'en ayant posté mon devoir sur ce site, je demandais simplement de l'aide.

Je rappelle que ces genres d'exercices existent pour mieux utiliser et apprendre le B.B-BA de l'anglais et

qu'avant de me lancer dans ce genre d'exercice, "Je demandais simplement de l'aide".

[yveslouis]

"Pour ma mise en page fantaisiste, il suffit simplement de sélectionner le texte écrit et de cliquer sur le bouton en haut à droite "Centré" Pigé ? "