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Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger ma petite rédaction s'il vous plait?

Merci beaucoup.

Preparing for a strike :

Can you imagine what would have happened if Louis and the others who lost their jobs had belonged to trade-union.

If Louis and the other had belonged to a union they could have a strike to defend Mary Bolan how she was not guilty.

They could have a lawsuit to prove that the machines were not up to standard and the boss could be punished by law.

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Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger ma petite rédaction s'il vous plait?

Merci beaucoup.

Preparing for a strike :

Can you imagine what would have happened if Louis and the others who lost their jobs had belonged to trade-union.

If Louis and the others had belonged to a union they could have gone on a strike to defend Mary Bolan how as/since she was not guilty.

They could have brought a lawsuit to prove that the machines were not up to standard and the boss could have been punished by law.

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