Anglais Essay À Faire Pour Lundi

[Étienne9]

Bonjour à vous tous,

Alors voilà j'ai un essay à faire pour Lundi et je l'ai fait, je dois faire entre 150 et 200 mots mais le truc c'est que j'ai fait beaucoup plus. Je vous poste ce que j'ai fait et j'aimerai savoir si vous pourriez me dire si des choses cloches ou s'il y a des fautes. Merci à vous !

Some parents send their children to a boarding school. We will see why they do it and if I think is a good idea and if I would like work away from home.

To begin, it’s not necessarily parents who would like their son or their daughter goes to boarding school.

Indeed, the pupil can see his friends more time having more independence without the parents or he can maybe work easily in the presence of friends.

It is possible too that parents and children doesn’t have the choice on account of the distance to home with school or owing to the orientation of the child.

But, most of the time the child is put in boarding school by her father and mother in order to succeed in the life.

I think it’s not a good idea because in my opinion we need to relax occasionally and it will like a jail for me to stay at school because I’m not accustoming to work without arrest.

At lunchtime, when I eat at home it’s an average to take the air and, as I have the good luck to live next to the high school so I will not agree to go at boarding school above all when I’m a young.

To continue with the distance between home and school, I wouldn’t study away from home because I will don’t see my friends and my family and I will can’t to do another thing than work all time to win money to live alone in the small room so it’s will very sad and I don’t want study far away my home.

To conclude, we saw that a person can be at boarding school for differences reasons and that I’m not interested to go on it.

[Maxzi]

Bonjour,

Je te donne juste quelques conseils dans la mesure de mes compétences.

Bonjour à vous tous,

Alors voilà j'ai un essay à faire pour Lundi et je l'ai fait, je dois faire entre 150 et 200 mots mais le truc c'est que j'ai fait beaucoup plus. Je vous poste ce que j'ai fait et j'aimerai savoir si vous pourriez me dire si des choses cloches ou s'il y a des fautes. Merci à vous !

Some parents send their children to a boarding school. We will see why they do it and if I think is a good it is a good idea and if I would like work to work away from home.

To begin, it's not necessarily parents who would like their son or their daughter goes to boarding school.

Indeed, the pupil can see his friends more time having more independence without the parents or he can maybe work easily in the presence of friends.

It is possible too that parents and children doesn't don't have the choice on account of the distance to home with school (de... à.. = from... to... ) or owing to the orientation of the child.

But, most of the time the child is put in boarding school by her his father and mother in order to succeed in the life in Life.

I think it's not a good idea because in my opinion tu fais une répétition inutile, choisis un des deux, we need to relax occasionally je te conseille d'utiliser plutôt sometimes and it will like it would be like a jail for me to stay at school because I'm not accustoming to work I'm not used to working (je n'ai pas l'habitude de travailler...) without arrest.

At lunchtime, when I eat at home it's an average to take the air it's a way to clear my head and, as I have the good luck to I'm lucky/fortunate to live next to the high school so I will not I would not agree to go at to boarding school above all when I'm a young.

To continue with the distance between home and school, I wouldn't study away from home because I will don't see I wouldn't see/wouldn't been able to see my friends and my family and I will can't to do another thing than work all time to win to earn money to live alone in the small room so it's will very sad and I don't want study far away my home. A revoir cette phrase très longue et qui part un peu dans tous les sens

To conclude, we saw that a person can be at boarding school for differences different reasons and that I'm not interested to go on it s'interresser= to be interested in (+verbe en ing)

[Étienne9]

Bonjour et merci beaucoup.

Après avoir corrigé vos fautes, en reste-il ? Si oui, comment faire pour y remédier ?

[Étienne9]

Réglé, merci quand même !

[Maxzi]

Tu peux le poster si tu veux qu'on jette un coup d'oeil.

[Jean B]

Réglé, merci quand même !