Mail For Easter To A Frien

[Marie-Paule]

Bonjour,

J'ai tenté de traduire avec mon vocabulaire ce petit texte qui sera envoyé par mail à mon amie anglophone. Je vous remercie d'avance de me rectifier les fautes:

Happy Easter to all of you,

My nephews are here and we prepared the meal together. We made hard-boiled eggs which we coloured and put in in a wicker basket for the entrance. We made a fish for the lunch (when we will serve it tomorrow, we'll put small jokes to draw to celebrate in a way the April 1st(April Fools's Day)

For the dessert we made a very tender chocolate cake and decorated it with small eggs and with glitter.

I prefer to receive all the family in our small apartment. My father-in-law needs to rest and my mother-in-law can't make any more meals for more than 8 people. So, my father-in-law and my mother-in-law can leave at home as soon as the tiredness will be felt. The children will stay at home to avoid the noise at the grandparent's. Only David's brothers will live at my parent-in-law's. Sure we will hide chocolate eggs in the public garden near to us.

Have a happy Esater in family,

See you soon,

Marie-Paule

[Jean B]

Bonjour Marie-Paule et joyeuses Pâques !

Bonjour,

J'ai tenté de traduire avec mon vocabulaire ce petit texte qui sera envoyé par mail à mon amie anglophone. Je vous remercie d'avance de me rectifier les fautes:

Happy Easter to all of you,

My nephews are here and we prepared the meal together. We made hard-boiled eggs which we coloured and put in a wicker basket in the entrance. We cooked a fish for the lunch (when we will serve it tomorrow, we'll put small jokes to be drawn to celebrate April 1st in a way (April Fools' Day)

For the dessert we made a very tender chocolate cake and decorated it with small eggs and chocolate chips.

I prefer to receive all the family in our small apartment. My father-in-law needs resting and my mother-in-law can no longer make meals for more than 8 people. So, my in-laws can leave and go back home as soon as they feel tired. The children will stay at our place to avoid making noise at their grandparents'. Only David's brothers will stay at my parents-in-law's. Sure we will hide chocolate eggs in the public garden near our place.

Have a happy Easter in family,

See you soon,

Marie-Paule

[Marie-Paule]

Bonjour,

Joyeuses Pâques également et merci beaucoup.

Bon weekend,

A très bientôt,

Marie-Paule.

[yveslouis]

Je te déconseille le futur après "when" :

"(when we will serve it tomorrow..."

[Jean B]

Je te déconseille le futur après "when" :

"(when we will serve it tomorrow..."

[yveslouis]

Ah ben, la honte soit sur moi !

Louée soit ta vigilance ! Merci !