Charlinee Posté(e) le 29 mars 2010 Signaler Posté(e) le 29 mars 2010 Bonjour ! J'ai un exercice a faire en anglais le sujet : What is your idea of ideal parents ? Voilà ma reponse ! PS : je suis assez nul en anglais c'est pour cela que je demande votre aide ! Merci de me repondre je pense que sa m'aidera justement a progresser ! Goodbye ! What is it all about this question ? It is a question of saying my arguments concerning my parents ideal ! For a start to begin the parents ideal have to understand us with regard to the exits, in note while being just. After that then I think that so that there is a good agreement between parents and teenagers it is necessary that he have dialogues, conversations, exits in family there. Obviously they have to be also very affectionate parents because it is very important. Afterwards it is necessary that ideal parent have the sense of humor to laugh, have fun but with the respect ! However parents ideal have to put us in the good road and evidemment of the discipline, but while being just and responsible. Because since any young we example on our parents. In a word , for my this parents ideal this is my parents !!!
E-Bahut Boltzmann_Solver Posté(e) le 29 mars 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 29 mars 2010 Bonjour ! J'ai un exercice a faire en anglais le sujet : What is your idea of ideal parents ? Voilà ma reponse ! PS : je suis assez nul en anglais c'est pour cela que je demande votre aide ! Merci de me repondre je pense que sa m'aidera justement a progresser ! Goodbye ! What is it all about this question ? It is a question of saying my arguments concerning my parents ideal ! For a start to begin the parents ideal have to understand us with regard to the exits, in note while being just. After that then I think that so that there is a good agreement between parents and teenagers it is necessary that he have dialogues, conversations, exits in family there. Obviously they have to be also very affectionate parents because it is very important. Afterwards it is necessary that ideal parent have the sense of humor to laugh, have fun but with the respect ! However parents ideal have to put us in the good road and evidemment of the discipline, but while being just and responsible. Because since any young we example on our parents. In a word , for my this parents ideal this is my parents !!!
Charlinee Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 Merci de m'avoir repondu , je vais essayer de l'arranger !
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 Bonjour, Bonjour ! J'ai un exercice à faire en anglais le sujet : What is your idea of ideal parents ? Voilà ma réponse ! PS : je suis assez nulle en anglais c'est pour cela que je demande votre aide ! Merci de me répondre je pense que sa ça m'aidera justement à progresser !
Charlinee Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 J'ai essayer de corriger mais je garantis pas que ce soit sans faute lol ! What is this question it all about ? It is a question of saying my arguments concerning my ideal parents. To start the ideal parents have to understand. I also think that they have to accept that their children. Then so that parents and the teenagers understand it going out is necessary that they speak. The children and parents have outing. Obviously they have to be also very affectionate parents because it is very important. After wards it is necessary that ideal parents have the sense of humour to laugh , have fun but with respect. However ideal parents have to put us on the good path and of discipline , but while being just and responsible because we take example on our parents. The ideal parents about whom I have to speak are my parents. Voilà, j'espere que ça ne sera pas pire que l'ancienne version mais j'ai déjà compris quelques fautes que j'ai faite :s Thank you !
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 30 mars 2010 J'ai essayé de corriger mais je garantis pas que ce soit sans faute lol ! What is this question it all about ? It is a question of saying my arguments concerning my ideal parents. To start First, the ideal parents have to understand their children. <Si tu ne mets pas de COD au verbe, la phrase n'a guère de sens. I also think that they have to accept that their children may act differently / be different from them. <Ne laisse jamais une phrase inachevée. Then, so that parents and the teenagers understand one another, it going out is necessary that they speak to one another. The children and parents have outing. <???? Obviously they have to be also very affectionate parents because it is very important. Afterwards<En un seul mot it is necessary that ideal parents have the sense of humour to laugh, have fun but with respect. However ideal parents have to put us on the good path and of teach us discipline, but while being just and responsible because we take example on our parents them.<Le pronom permet d'éviter la répétition du nom. The ideal parents about whom I have to speak are my parents. Voilà, j'espère que ça ne sera pas pire que l'ancienne version mais j'ai déjà compris quelques fautes que j'ai faites. Thank you !
Charlinee Posté(e) le 31 mars 2010 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 31 mars 2010 Merci de votre aide, je crois que sa m'a bien aider ! Même si il y a encore des fautes !
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