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[Ilona37]

Bonjour, je viens de taper un texte j'aimerais savoir si il y a des fautes.. merci d'avance

We are all more or less easily influenced By the world which surrounds us. From a personal point of view, I am bad-tempered, but I am someone easily influenced.. I often Have the feeling that what I make relates to the others, wheter it's with my friends or my family.. I have no self-condifent and I don't know how to make the good choices , I usually ask the opinion of the persons who surrounds me for fear of deceiving me.. In the life, I don't know where I go. The persons who said to me that I was easilly influenced have me all the time most of the time give concrete explanations. When the persons take advantage of one's, I don't realize nothing, and I don't learn from my mistake. I take the criticisms positively and when they are nasty criticisms, I smile and bear it by saying to me that it's my fault. Since I am besides the kind To go to the same sense of conversation of the others, I don't contradict(if I don't contradict, It's not to give a bad image of me ).. To give an exemple, some time ago I quarrelled with my friend with whom I am very close because my circle influenced me to do it.. I hope that later I would open eyes and recover self-assurance.. to be, finally able to make my own decisions.. all things come to him that waits ..

[yveslouis]

Bonjour, je viens de taper un texte j'aimerais savoir si il y a des fautes. Merci d'avance.

We are all more or less easily influenced by the world which surrounds us. From a personal point of view, I am bad-tempered, but I am someone easily influenced. I often have the feeling that what I make relates to the others, whether it's with my friends or my family. I have no self-condifence / I'm not self-confident and I don't know how to make the good choices , I usually ask the opinion of the persons who surrounds me for fear of deceiving me. In the life, I don't know where I go. The persons who said to me that I was easilly influenced me all the time most of the time give concrete explanations have given me concrete explanations almost every time. When the persons take advantage of one's (que veux-tu dire ?), I don't realize nothing anything, and I don't learn from my mistakes. I take the criticisms positively and when they are nasty criticisms, I smile and bear it by saying to me that it's my fault. Besides, Since I am besides the kind to go to the same sense way of conversation of as the others, I don't contradict(if I don't contradict, It's not to give a bad image of me ). To give an exemple, some time ago I quarrelled with my friend with whom I am very close because my circle influenced me to do it. I hope that later I would will open my eyes and recover self-assurance. to be, finally able to make my own decisions. all things come to him that waits.