hypnotic Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 Signaler Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 bonjour,, j'ai un devoir en anglais mais je ne suis pas sur que la syntaxe et la grammaire soit correcte c'est pourquoi j'aimerais être corrigé. Jack the protagonist of the story had been living in the street of N.Y since 5 years when he was expulsed. A policeman found him in central park and woke him up in the middle of the night. When he woke up, Jack tryed to explain to the policeman his situation. "Mister! you can't stay here!" shouted the policeman " Wake up, faster that" he admited bitterly Jack surprised and woken by the voice of the policeman tries to answer "What is it?" mumbled Jack wearily "I make nothing bad" he added "I know and I'm sorry but you can't sleep in central park, it's the law" he reminded quietly "I think you should go to a flophouse no?" he asked "I know it's a solution but the thought of spending the night in a flophouse repulsed me" Jack replyed. The policeman shake one's head and understood that he had usually spent the night here "Since how long you sleep in central park" he retorted kindly This situation discouraged him, he wants to tell him that he hadn't slept in a house for 5 years but he didn't wants to exposed his life. "It's not important" He said reluctantly "Talk with me, I want to help you, please!" he replyed loudly "Listen me, you must keep hope, I'm going to help you. It's the end, you will not sleep any more in the street or in the subways of N.Y "Usually the work of the policemen of N.Y is to wake the tramps who sleeping in the street" he retorted The policeman blinked and said "I know but today it's different"
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 Bonjour et bienvenue, Bonjour, J'ai un devoir en anglais mais je ne suis pas sûr que la syntaxe et la grammaire soient correctes. C'est pourquoi j'aimerais être corrigé.
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 29 janvier 2010 Juste un essai pour voir à combien de "/quote" on a droit. Copie du texte de JRB Bonjour et bienvenue, Bonjour, J'ai un devoir en anglais mais je ne suis pas sûr que la syntaxe et la grammaire soient correctes. C'est pourquoi j'aimerais être corrigé. Jack the protagonist of the story had been living in the streets of N.Y since for 5 years when he was expulsed expelled.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 30 janvier 2010 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 30 janvier 2010 Juste un essai pour voir à combien de "/quote" on a droit. Copie du texte de JRB [...//...] Un grand bravo à JRB pour le travail énorme qu'il accomplit.
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