Correction De Redaction

[Maxou62]

Bonjour j'ai une redaction a effectuer sur une lettre dont le sujet est :

Write a letter to students Partnership Worldwide explaining why you would like to join their programme.

Voici donc ma lettre

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your website and I am very interested in your offer in Africa or in the South of Asia with the aim of helping the persons and learning the education in young people and facilitating them to the environment.

My name is Bernard, I am 17 years old, I am student at the high school Guy Mollet to Arras and I learns English to the high school. I am not very strong in English but to speak English all day could very well help and I would like I could usually speak English at the end of the program.

For it I am very motivated to obtain this work because I love the children and I like helping in person who are in the need. Furthermore if I obtain this offer, I would like to install a school to teach the culture to the young person of the village so that he is more civilized and so that they know a little the world which surrounds them. I am very brave and mature enough to live in autonomy, it is for that that I am voluntary to make this work. I like discovering new cultures and gastronomies.

Finally I find that this work would help me for my future a lot because I would have acquired a work experience and I would be speak English correctly to be able to work in an English country but also the fact of knowing how to speak English on my CV can make many thing.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Merci beaucoup de votre aide apporté

[yveslouis]

Bonjour j'ai une rédaction à effectuer sur une lettre dont le sujet est :

Write a letter to students Partnership Worldwide explaining why you would like to join their programme.

Voici donc ma lettre

Dear Sir or Madam,

I saw your website and I am very interested in your offer in Africa or in the South of Asia with the aim of helping the persons/people and learning the education in young people (que veux-tu dire ?) and facilitating them to the environment.

My name is Bernard, I am 17 years old, I am a student at Guy Mollet the high school Guy Mollet to in Arras and I learns English to the high school there. I am not very strong in/good at English but to speaking English all day long could very well be helpful and I would like wish I could usually speak English fluently at the end of the programme.

For it That's why I am very motivated to obtain this work because I love the children and I like helping people in person who are in the need. Furthermore if I obtain this offer/I am granted the job, I would like to install a school to teach the culture to the youngsters person of the village so that he is they are more civilized and so that they know a little the world which surrounds them. I am very brave and mature enough to live in autonomy be self-sufficient, it is for that that that's why I am voluntary to make this work volunteer for the job. I like discovering new cultures and gastronomies.

Finally I find that this work would help me a lot for my future a lot because I would have acquired a working experience and I would be able to speak English correctly so as to (be able) to work in an English country but also the fact of knowing how to speak English on my CV can make many thing would change a lot of things.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Merci beaucoup de votre aide apportée

[Maxou62]

learning the education in young people (que veux-tu dire ?)

[Jean B]

learning the education in young people (que veux-tu dire ?)

[yveslouis]

Je veux dire "apprendre l'éducation au jeune enfants"

"teach young children education" (le C.O.D passe en second)

[Maxou62]

D'accord

Merci à JRB et yveslouis

bonne continuation

[yveslouis]

You're welcome!