namio11 Posté(e) le 30 décembre 2009 Signaler Posté(e) le 30 décembre 2009 Bonjour ! Le sujet de cet essay est :"The nicest Christmas present I ever got" Je me remercie de me signaler mes erreurs afin de m'aider à progresser!! When I read the subject of this essay, I tried to remember the nicest present I got for Christmas but it was impossible to choose one . A list of toy when I was young then a lot of differents things. So I remember last year. My son was one year old . While I came back from shopping, I found a Christmas tree abandonned on the pavement with a paper on it : « Please adopt me. I don’t want to spend Christmas alone in the cold. » Obviously, the tree found his place in our sitting room. Glitter, pencil and paper, I decorated this tree. It was the beginning of my discovery about the sense of Christmas. How to discribe the face of my son when he saw it ? His eyesbrightened, his smile was so cute. All the Christmas song I heard when i was young took a sense at last. The greatest moment was the meeting of all the family around this tree. No more quarrel, just being together for the happiness of a child. It’s certainly the most Christmas present I ever got !! I know now that Santa Claus does exist ! et bonnes fetes de fin d'année!!!
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 31 décembre 2009 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 31 décembre 2009 Bonjour ! Le sujet de cet essay est :"The nicest Christmas present I ever got" Je me remercie de me signaler mes erreurs afin de m'aider à progresser!! When I read the subject of this essay, I tried to remember the nicest present I got for Christmas but it was impossible to choose one . A list of toy when I was young (Est-ce le sujet de la phrase ?) then a lot of differents things. So I remember last year. My son was one year old . While I came back from shopping, I found a Christmas tree abandonned on the pavement with a paper on it : « Please adopt me. I don’t want to spend Christmas alone in the cold. » Obviously, the tree found his its place in our sitting room. Glitter, pencil and paper, I decorated this tree. It was the beginning of my discovery about the sense of Christmas. How to/How could I ever describe the face of my son when he saw it ? His eyes brightened, his smile was so cute. All the Christmas songs I had heard when I was young took a sense at last. The greatest moment was the meeting of all the family around this tree. No more quarrel, just being together for the happiness of a child. It’s certainly the most (adjectif ?) Christmas present I ever got !! I know now that Santa Claus does exist ! et bonnes fêtes de fin d'année!!!
namio11 Posté(e) le 10 janvier 2010 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 10 janvier 2010 Bonne année!! et je souhaite vous remercier pour votre aide !! Ca m'a vraiment permis de reprendre confiance en moi et je vois les résultats avec les retours de mes devoirs qui s'améliorent !! Je trouve ça épatatnt que vous consacriez votre temps en partageant vos connaissances! Merci et bravo!! Meilleurs voeux!
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