Correction D'une Texte En Anglais

[gollum]

Bonsoir

Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes et me les expliquer.

je pense avoir beaucoup de fautes j'ai travaillé avec le dictionnaire pour les mots que je ne connaissais pas.

voici le texte que j'ai fait.

merci de votre aide

I find than the attidude of the father to Neil is very hard to his son.

Mister Perry has very authoritarian character.

_<< When you 've finished médical school and you're on your own,you can do as you please,

Until then,you will listen to Me>>

Mister Perry says then he is «the boss »;the head of the family,thus we have to listen to him.

Her son does not manage to stand up to his father.

I find unflair that his father uses affection of her mother to blackmaid him and feel guiltry.

_ « you know what this means to your mother,don't you »

For conclure,that reminds me, that is difficult for Neil to rebel as long as he will not be autonomousd.

Therefore,I'd say that to a certain mesure Neil does not want appearas the égoistic an ungrateful son,

[yveslouis]

Bonsoir

Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes et me les expliquer.

je pense avoir beaucoup de fautes j'ai travaillé avec le dictionnaire pour les mots que je ne connaissais pas.

voici le texte que j'ai fait.

merci de votre aide

I find / think (that) the attidude of the father to Neil is very hard to(wards) his son. (N'as-tu pas l'impression de te répéter ? À moins que Neil ne soit pas le fils...)

Mister Perry has a very authoritarian/overbearing character.

_<< When you've finished médical (pas d'accents en anglais.) school and you're on your own, you can do as you please,

Until then, you will listen to Me (avec une majuscule ?)>>

Mister Perry says then he is «the boss » ; the head of the family, thus we ("nous" ou son fils ?) have to listen to him.

Her His son does not manage to stand up to his father.

I find unflair ("unfair") that his father uses affection of her (du fils ?) mother to blackmaid (???) him and feel guiltry (???). ...that his father should use his mother's affection to...

_ « You know what this means to your mother, don't you »

For conclure To conclude, that reminds me, (Revois la syntaxe. La ponctuation a un rôle très important.) that it is difficult for Neil to rebel as long as he will not be is not autonomousd self-sufficient.

Therefore, I'd say that to a certain mesure (Mets ce bout de phrase entre virgules) Neil does not want to appear as the an égoistic (pas d'accents en anglais)/ selfish and ungrateful son,

[gollum]

Bonsoir

Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes et me les expliquer.

je pense avoir beaucoup de fautes j'ai travaillé avec le dictionnaire pour les mots que je ne connaissais pas.

voici le texte que j'ai fait.

merci de votre aide

I find / think (that) the attidude of the father to Neil is very hard to(wards) his son. (N'as-tu pas l'impression de te répéter ? À moins que Neil ne soit pas le fils...)

Mister Perry has a very authoritarian/overbearing character.

_<< When you've finished médical (pas d'accents en anglais.) school and you're on your own, you can do as you please,

Until then, you will listen to Me (avec une majuscule ?)>>

Mister Perry says then he is «the boss » ; the head of the family, thus we ("nous" ou son fils ?) have to listen to him.

Her His son does not manage to stand up to his father.

I find unflair ("unfair") that his father uses affection of her (du fils ?) mother to blackmaid (???) him and feel guiltry (???). ...that his father should use his mother's affection to...

_ « You know what this means to your mother, don't you »

For conclure To conclude, that reminds me, (Revois la syntaxe. La ponctuation a un rôle très important.) that it is difficult for Neil to rebel as long as he will not be is not autonomousd self-sufficient.

Therefore, I'd say that to a certain mesure (Mets ce bout de phrase entre virgules) Neil does not want to appear as the an égoistic (pas d'accents en anglais)/ selfish and ungrateful son,

[gollum]

Bonjour

je vous remercie de votre aide

[yveslouis]

You're welcome!