Jonh Lennon

[Audee]

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I am going to speak of Jonh winston lennon, he is the founder of the famous band english ThE BEATLES.

Jonh lennon was born 9 october 1940 at liverpool in England, was an english rock musician, singer, author, he play uitar, piano, bass and armonica.he started its carrer in the group THE BETLES composed of paul mac carney, ringo starr and geirge arrisson, which marqued 1960s,making leaves groups rock the most famous of the world. Then he puts an end to BEATLES And beging a solo carrer while forming a group with his woman and by leading activities for the peace. Them ???"il se fera"??? assacined the 9 december 1980 aged 40.

[yveslouis]

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I am going to speak [of] about John Winston Lennon, (Est-ce la même phrase ?) he is the founder of the famous band English group ThE BEATLES.

Jonh lennon was born 9 october 1940 on October, 1940 at liverpool in England, (Où est le sujet ?) was an English rock musician, singer, author, he play (présent ?) the guitar, piano, bass and armonica mouth organ (n'oublie pas l'article défini ddevant les instruments de musique). he (Majuscule ?) started its his carrer (orthographe ?) in the group THE BETLES (orthographe ?) composed of paul mac carney, ringo starr and geirge arrisson (majuscules ?) , which marqued (orthographe ?) (o 1960s, making leaves groups rock (???) the most famous of in the world. Then he puts an end to the BEATLES And (pourquoi une majuscule ?) beging (orthographe) a solo carrer (orthographe ?) while forming a group with his woman wife and by leading activities for the peace. Them (Then ?) ???"il se fera"??? assacined he will be assassinated on the 9 december 1980 (voir date plus haut) aged 40.