namio11 Posté(e) le 16 novembre 2009 Signaler Posté(e) le 16 novembre 2009 bosoir , je dois rediger un texte sur le sujet 'Little green riding hood " Once upon a time , there was a little girl who lived in a cottage in the middle of the wood . She was forced to wear red clothes every day « The little girls must have good manners , they must wear red clothing and be polished with their Grandma ! » As soon as she went out, she changed clothing into green one . One day , her mather said to her « Take this basket and goes in visit to your Grandma. But, don't talk to any strangers ! » She left, changed clothes behind the cottage and followed the way of wood to the Grandma's cottage . Suddenly a dark animal emerged from the bushes . He appareaded surprising to see her : « - Hi! What make an young girl equipped in green in the woods? It's so boring to get dressed in red , isn't it ? And so stereotyped so!! Yes, indeed ! Let me guess ? Did your mother ask you to take care of your Grandma? For sure. I imagine that to be a good little girl prepares me to be a good wife . Could I make the way with you? We will talking about the rôle of womyn in your society . » They arrived to the Grandma's cottage . They knocked on the door. The old woman opened the the door . « Who is this dark unknown? And why your clothes are green? » The wolf answered : « Have you noticed that this green matches in her eyes? » She raised the head and felt into the eyes of the wolf. « Oh! Enter dear unknown ! And to the little girl « Thank you for the basket and last the hello to your mother. » The door was closed again on this romance through the generations . The abandonned little green riding hood decided to go to Miami to forget her sorrow . mes derniers cours d'anglais remontent à loin comme vous pourrez surement le constater . En vous remerciant
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2009 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2009 BoNsoir , je dois rédiger un texte sur le sujet 'Little green riding hood " Once upon a time , there was a little girl who lived in a cottage in the middle of the woodS . She was forced to wear red clothes every day « [The l]Little girls must have good manners , they must wear red clothing and be [polished] POLITE with their Grandma ! » As soon as she went out, she changed clothing into green one One day , her mOther said to her « Take this basket and [goes in visit] GO to your Grandma'S. But, don't talk to any strangers ! » She left, changed clothes behind the cottage and followed the way [of] IN THE woodS to [the] HER Grandma's cottage . Suddenly a dark animal emerged from the bushes . He [appareaded surprising] SEEMED SURPRISED to see her : « - Hi! What [make an] DOES A young girl [equipped] in A green OUTFIT DO in the woods? It's so boring to get dressed in red , isn't it ? And so stereotyped [so] TOO!! Yes, indeed ! Let me guess [?]! Did your mother ask you to take care of your Grandma? For sure. I imagine that [to] beING a good little girl prepares me to be a good wife . Could I make the way/GO with you? We will talk[ing] about the [rôle] ROLE of [womyn] WOMEN in your society . » They arrived [to the] Grandma's cottage . They knocked on the door. The old woman opened the [the] door . « Who is this dark [unknown]STRANGER? And why ARE your clothes [are] green? » The wolf answered : « Have you noticed that (this) green matches [in] her eyes? » She raised the head and felt into the eyes (???) of the wolf. « Oh! Enter dear [unknown] STRANGER ! And to the little girl « Thank you for the basket and [last the hello] (Is that humour?) to your mother. » The door was closed again on this romance through the generations . The abandonned little green riding hood decided to go to Miami to forget her sorrow .
namio11 Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2009 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 18 novembre 2009 Merci beaucoup pour votre aide . J'ai utilisé le terme "womyn " en référence au texte original qui reprend des termes "politiquement correct " dans ses récits humoristiques . "she felt into the eyes " : je voulais dire "elle est tombé dans les yeux du loup pour signifier qu'elle a remarqué ses yeux et est tombé amoureuse " mais apparement ça ne se comprend pas .. et pour la dernière replique de la grand mère , j'essaie surement de faire de l'humour , simplement la grand mère dit à sa petite fille de passer le bonjour à sa mère pour clore la conversation et la renvoyer dans ses pénates .. encore merci pour le temps que vous consacrez à mon sujet . BoNsoir , je dois rédiger un texte sur le sujet 'Little green riding hood " Once upon a time , there was a little girl who lived in a cottage in the middle of the woodS . She was forced to wear red clothes every day « [The l]Little girls must have good manners , they must wear red clothing and be [polished] POLITE with their Grandma ! » As soon as she went out, she changed clothing into green one One day , her mOther said to her « Take this basket and [goes in visit] GO to your Grandma'S. But, don't talk to any strangers ! » She left, changed clothes behind the cottage and followed the way [of] IN THE woodS to [the] HER Grandma's cottage . Suddenly a dark animal emerged from the bushes . He [appareaded surprising] SEEMED SURPRISED to see her : « - Hi! What [make an] DOES A young girl [equipped] in A green OUTFIT DO in the woods? It's so boring to get dressed in red , isn't it ? And so stereotyped [so] TOO!! Yes, indeed ! Let me guess [?]! Did your mother ask you to take care of your Grandma? For sure. I imagine that [to] beING a good little girl prepares me to be a good wife . Could I make the way/GO with you? We will talk[ing] about the [rôle] ROLE of [womyn] WOMEN in your society . » They arrived [to the] Grandma's cottage . They knocked on the door. The old woman opened the [the] door . « Who is this dark [unknown]STRANGER? And why ARE your clothes [are] green? » The wolf answered : « Have you noticed that (this) green matches [in] her eyes? » She raised the head and felt into the eyes (???) of the wolf. « Oh! Enter dear [unknown] STRANGER ! And to the little girl « Thank you for the basket and [last the hello] (Is that humour?) to your mother. » The door was closed again on this romance through the generations . The abandonned little green riding hood decided to go to Miami to forget her sorrow .
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