Lettre

[walid75010]

Bonjour je dois écrire "une lettre au ministre de l'environnement", ou je dois lui écrire 5 problemes sur le rechauffement climatique et trouvé 5solutions, pour linstant jen ai trouvé que 3 mai pouvez vous tout de meme me corrigez svp, merci : Monday, october 19th 2009 Tour Voltaire ,92055 La Défense CEDEX Dear Environment minister,I noticed, like all the world that there's many problems, which increases global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. I give you some tips you can send people to reduce global warming. We can stop the deforestation if all the people buy paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle because the jungle habitat of animals who are essential for our lifes. An other problem is there are too much waste who crate pollution, so we can put the waste into "no compost. The people must use public transport more often in commun electric vehicles to dismiss less Co2 possible because our air is so polluted.i'm looking forward to getting an answer. YOUR SINCERELY

[walid75010]

voila une autre version améliorer je pense, merci:'Dear M. jean-louis BORLOO,I noticed, like all the world that there are many problems , which are increases global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. I give you some tips you can send people to reduce global warming. We can stop the deforestation if everybody buy paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle because the jungle is habitat of animals which are essential for our lifes. An other problem is that there are too much waste which make pollution, so we can put the waste into "coin de compost" (je ne sais pas le dire). The people must use public transport more often in commun electric vehicles to dismiss less Co2 because our air is so polluted. i'm looking forward to getting an answer.YOUR SINCERELY

[walid75010]

svp personne pour un peu d'aide ?

[walid75010]

svp aidez moi

[yveslouis]

Voila une autre version, améliorée je pense, merci:

'Dear M. jean-louis BORLOO, I noticed, like all the world everybody that there are many problems [,] which [are] increase global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. Let me give you some tips (which) you can [send] tell people about to reduce global warming. We can stop [the] deforestation if everybody buys paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle rain forests because the jungle is they are the habitat of animals which are essential for our lives. Another problem is that there are too much waste which makes pollution/pollutes, so we can put [the] (pas d'article quand c'est "en général") waste into "coin de compost" compost devices (je ne sais pas le dire). The p People must use public transport more often in commun(??? Veux-tu dire "particularly electric vehicles" ?) electric vehicles to dismiss discharge less Co2 because our air is so polluted. I'm (En anglais, comme en français, une phrase commence par une majuscule. C'est d'autant plus le cas en anglais quand on a le sujet "I") looking forward to getting an answer.

YOURS SINCERELY