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[walid75010]

Bonjour, je dois faire un résumé sur un texte, je vous fait parvenir le texte puis mon résumé, pouvez vous me corrigez svp. :At last month's International Symposium on Wearable Computers in Seattle, MicroOptical debuted its prototype projectable-display glasses (see the photo). A tiny LCD in one temple generates high- resolution, 24-bit text, graphics, and video, viewed through optics hidden in the lenses. The display is projected in front of users, right in the middle of their surroundings, as if they were watching television. MicroOptical is in partnership talks with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. Within the next two years, thanks to an alliance between MicroOptical and Essilor International, a maker of ophthalmic lenses, consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth- enabled eyewear with MicroOptical's embedded technology from stores such as LensCrafters as part of a complete prescription eyeglass package, which will cost $400 to $600. MicroOptical is also looking to make the glasses compatible with cell phones. Letting users pick standard frames and not blocking their view of their surroundings have been elusive design goals, according to Paul Zavracky, MicroOptical's president. "These have been our objectives from the beginning," he says. "People will be able to sit on a train or walk around and have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and they won't have to wear helmets." et mon resumé :MicroOptical debute its prototype projectable-display glasses. The display is projected in front of users as if they were watching television. MicroOptical work with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth- enabled eyewear with microOptical embedded technology, within the next two year. An eyeglass package will cost $400 to $600 for the president of MicroOptical' president. says. "People will have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and everywhere, less helmets." mercii

[walid75010]

personne pr un peu daide ??

Bonjour, je dois faire un résumé sur un texte, je vous fait parvenir le texte puis mon résumé, pouvez vous me corrigez svp. :At last month's International Symposium on Wearable Computers in Seattle, MicroOptical debuted its prototype projectable-display glasses (see the photo). A tiny LCD in one temple generates high- resolution, 24-bit text, graphics, and video, viewed through optics hidden in the lenses. The display is projected in front of users, right in the middle of their surroundings, as if they were watching television. MicroOptical is in partnership talks with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. Within the next two years, thanks to an alliance between MicroOptical and Essilor International, a maker of ophthalmic lenses, consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth- enabled eyewear with MicroOptical's embedded technology from stores such as LensCrafters as part of a complete prescription eyeglass package, which will cost $400 to $600. MicroOptical is also looking to make the glasses compatible with cell phones. Letting users pick standard frames and not blocking their view of their surroundings have been elusive design goals, according to Paul Zavracky, MicroOptical's president. "These have been our objectives from the beginning," he says. "People will be able to sit on a train or walk around and have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and they won't have to wear helmets." et mon resumé :MicroOptical debute its prototype projectable-display glasses. The display is projected in front of users as if they were watching television. MicroOptical work with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth- enabled eyewear with microOptical embedded technology, within the next two year. An eyeglass package will cost $400 to $600 for the president of MicroOptical' president. says. "People will have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and everywhere, less helmets." mercii

[yveslouis]

Ta présentation n'invite pas à jeter un oeil sur ton travail. Mets-toi un instant à la place du professeur qui devrait le corriger : Il faut un bon moment pour voir où ton résumé commence.

Bonjour, je dois faire un résumé sur un texte, je vous fais parvenir le texte puis mon résumé, pouvez-vous me corriger svp. :

At last month's International Symposium on Wearable Computers in Seattle, MicroOptical debuted its prototype projectable-display glasses (see the photo). A tiny LCD in one temple generates high- resolution, 24-bit text, graphics, and video, viewed through optics hidden in the lenses. The display is projected in front of users, right in the middle of their surroundings, as if they were watching television. MicroOptical is in partnership talks with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. Within the next two years, thanks to an alliance between MicroOptical and Essilor International, a maker of ophthalmic lenses, consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth- enabled eyewear with MicroOptical's embedded technology from stores such as LensCrafters as part of a complete prescription eyeglass package, which will cost $400 to $600. MicroOptical is also looking to make the glasses compatible with cell phones. Letting users pick standard frames and not blocking their view of their surroundings have been elusive design goals, according to Paul Zavracky, MicroOptical's president. "These have been our objectives from the beginning," he says. "People will be able to sit on a train or walk around and have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and they won't have to wear helmets."

Et mon resumé : MicroOptical debute its prototype projectable-display glasses. The display is projected in front of users as if they were watching television. MicroOptical work with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. Consumers will be able to purchase Bluetooth-enabled eyewear with microOptical embedded technology, within the next two years. An eyeglass package will cost $400 to $600 for according to the president of MicroOptical's president. He says. "People will have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies-and everywhere, less without helmets." mercii

[walid75010]

daccord, merci, esque cette version est mieux? merciA Prototype projectable-display glasses is debute by MicroOptical. The display is projected in front of users as if they were watching television. MicroOptical work with PDA manufacturers and wearable-computer companies. Consumers will can Bluetooth-enabled eyewear with microOptical embedded technology, within the next two years. An eyeglass package will cost $400 to $600 according to MicroOptical's president. He says. "People will have access to information like e- mail, the Internet, GPS, and movies everywhere, without helmets." merciet pouvez vous me corrigez mes fautes svp