Textee A Corrigé Svp

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Bonjour

Voila alors moi j'aii un devoir maison pour lundi, ou je dois donné mon opignon. Voilaa ce que j'ai fait:

pouvez vous me corriger les fautes SVP.

Introduction: a professor of Singapore has struck a student disruptive with a book. And this event done a lot of debate on intenet. here is my opinion:As Mr. ..., i day that the gesture that Mr. NG was not so serious that that, it was certainly justified. Mr NG was very in anger against this student who had pushed end. I do not understand why this incident is as much polémyque and that some people such as Mr. ..not axepte not this gesture while they do not know how they would have reacted. This is not as if the professor NG had struck the student in him fesant trés evil, this was only a small blow of book for it given a good lesson. This inssuportable student disrupted many its class, Mr wanted the was punished and that is on him that the punishment is decayed.

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Bonjour

Voila alors moi j'aii un devoir maison pour lundi, ou je dois donné mon opignon. Voilaa ce que j'ai fait:

pouvez vous me corriger les fautes SVP.

Introduction: A professor of in Singapore has struck a disruptive student disruptive with a book. And this event done led to a lot of debate on the Intenet. Here is my opinion: As Mr. ..., I'LL say that the gesture that Mr. NG did was not that so serious that that, it was certainly justified. Mr NG was very in anger angry against this student who had pushed driven him to his wits' end. I do not understand why this incident is as much polémyque was so controversial and that why some people such as/like Mr. ..did not axepte accept not this gesture while they do not know how they would have reacted. This is not as if the professor NG had struck the student in him fesant trés evil (ça sent le traducteur automatique, que j'abhorre.), this was only a small blow of with a book for it given to give him a good lesson/to teach him a thing or two. This inssuportable unbearable student often disrupted many its his class, Mr wanted the was him to be punished. and that is on him that the punishment is decayed.