écriture Svp

[walid75010]

Bonjour,j'étudie un texte, plus précisement une lettre d'un jeune, en prison, l'ami de andy, un jeune qui a tué plusieurs personne dans son lycée. Je vous fais parvenir la derniere partie de sa lettre. "When i leave in february, i plan to finish school. i also want to become a spokesperson for PAX, an organization that helps prevent gun violence.I don't want another school shooting to happen.Nobody should go through what i did. If i could do things over, i would have gone to Andy's house and told his father what was going on".

Je dois écrire une sorte de lettre, a la place du jeune,en disant pourquoi je veux etre le porte parole de la PAX. Mais je n'ais pas tro d'idée, svp aidez moi..

Good morning,

I am a studients and i am in prison and when i leave in February, I would like o become a sokesperson for your organization, the PAX. I want this because in February las year, My friend Andy Williams had do a "high school shooting" and that had me terrified.So I think I am well placed to make the prevention against firearms and with my arguments and what i have lived, I could maybe even to prohibit the carrying of weapons for all peoples in the USA. I find that this is not normal that are so easy to have a weapon or to buy bullet in supermarket. I would ask you, at my exit, accept me as a spokesperson for your organization, thank you.

A boy in detress.

Svp corrigez mes fautes et donnez moi d'autres idées svp. Merci d'avance

[yveslouis]

Je dois écrire une sorte de lettre, à la place du jeune,en disant pourquoi je veux être le porte-parole de la PAX. Mais je n'ai pas trop d'idées, svp aidez-moi..

Good morning,

I am a studients and I am in prison and when I leave in February, I would like to become a spokesperson for your organization, the PAX. I want this/That's what I would like to be because in February last year, my friend Andy Williams had do did a "high school shooting" and that had me terrified me. So I think I am well placed to make the prevention take preventive action against firearms and, with my arguments and what I have lived, maybe I could maybe even to prohibit the carrying of weapons for all peoples in the USA. I find that this it is not normal that are one can so easily to have a weapon or to buy bullets in supermarkets. I would like to ask you, at my exit , to accept me as a spokesperson for your organization, when I go out. Thank you in advance.

A boy in distress.

Svp corrigez mes fautes et donnez-moi d'autres idées svp. Merci d'avance.