Correction Anglais

[redboots]

bonjour a tous en ce si beau dimanche,

je viens de finir mon résumé d'anglais, j'aimerais beaucoup que vous puissiez me le corriger et me donner quelques petits conseils ou expressions utiles que je pourraient intégrer. Merci beaucoup, bonne journée.

Tony Wilmot Skeleton in the Cupboard

For several days now, they had sat at the same bench for the mid-day break. To him, it was a fillip to his middle-aged man’s morale (she had half of his age).

Earlier that morning, events had taken a more serious turn. He works in the Vehicle Registration in the Town Hall. And the young girl of the park bench came in, as an enquirer. She traced an MG sports cars owner, who had lived in Elmston and got married 20 years ago. In the thread of the discussion, the man told her he used to live in Elmston. Immediately, he felt a twinge if unease, understanding he had too much said.

For he used to run an MG. And he had married, with Margaret, 20 years ago.

It was an evening; he had been exceeding the speed limit, and a 10 aged girl, was hurt by him. He had panicked and left her in a hit-and-run. If he had stayed, his driving license would been suspended. And now, he feared the enquirer came found him.

To create a diversion, he told her about his friend, who lived in Elmston too. But finally, called this friend “Robert Smythe” (his proper name), and she exclaimed that it is this man she searched!

An evening, Margaret (Robert’s wife) received a letter from the young enquirer. In this, she describes her feelings, now she has refunded her both mother. Margaret glanced at Robert but he seemed unaware of her agitation. Margaret had left the young girl, before her marriage with Robert.

[yveslouis]

bonjour a tous en ce si beau dimanche,

je viens de finir mon résumé d'anglais, j'aimerais beaucoup que vous puissiez me le corriger et me donner quelques petits conseils ou expressions utiles que je pourraient intégrer. Merci beaucoup, bonne journée.

Tony Wilmot Skeleton in the Cupboard

For several days now, they had sat at the same bench for the mid-day break. To him, it was a fillip to his middle-aged man’s morale (she had was half of his age).

Earlier that morning, events had taken a more serious turn. He worked in the Vehicle Registration in the Town Hall. And the young girl of the park bench came had come in, as an enquirer. She traced an MG sports cars owner, who had lived in Elmston and had got married 20 years ago before. In the thread of the discussion, the man had told her he used to live in Elmston. Immediately, he felt a twinge of unease, understanding he had said too much said.

For he used to run an MG. And he had married, with Margaret, 20 years ago.

It was an evening; he had been exceeding the speed limit, and a 10 aged years-old girl, was had been hurt by him. He had panicked and left her in a hit-and-run. If he had stayed, his driving license would have been suspended. And now, he feared the enquirer came found had come to find him.

To create a diversion, he told her about his friend, who lived in Elmston too. But finally, called this friend “Robert Smythe” (his proper name), and she exclaimed that it is this man she searched was the man she was looking for!

An One evening, Margaret (Robert’s wife) received a letter from the young enquirer. In this, she describes her feelings, now she has refunded her both mother (Je ne comprends pas cette phrase) . Margaret glanced at Robert but he seemed unaware of her agitation. Margaret had left the young girl, before her marriage with Robert.

(Ce dernier paragraphe est incompréhensible pour moi.)

[tenchin]

She traced an MG sports cars owner, who had lived in Elmston and got married 20 years ago.

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