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[Grib]

Bonjour,

Mon sujet est le suivant : Making money is a priority for many people. Is it the case for you ?

Pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes et m’aider à faire des phrases biens structurées ?

J’ai beaucoup de mal à traduire le français vers l’anglais et donc à faire des phrases compréhensibles car je fais du mot à mot !

Je dois rendre ce devoir pour vendredi, j’espère que vous pourrez me donner un petit coup de pouce avant

Merci d’avance !

A lot of people just think to make money, they don’t matter the morking-conditions of their employees.Their only aim is to earn a maximum of money, it’s become an obsession. However, what it used for ? Maybe to buy a big house, to make a lot of travels, to have a nice car... But as we say « Money don’t make happiness ». For men money enables us to live because it is essential but I don’t want to work in the only aim to accumulate money. Of course, I would like to have a good job and earn a good salary like everyone, but it’s not my priority. In first, I want to have a job that I like, that I can practise day after day without weariness. It’s the thing wich do the real happiness of people. We have only one life so I don’t want to spoil it to work in bad working-conditions and hate what I do. I want to use my life to make all I like as well in leisure as in work. In this case everybody can be happy without be rich. The priority of a lot of people is to eat and to take lodgings it’s often immigrants who don’t have choice to find a good job or earn a lot of money. So, they take what they find and they are ready to work in horrible contions for a poor salary. Often, they are exploites by their employer who mislead of their needed and their candour making us to work more and more.

[yveslouis]

Voici un début :

A lot of people just think <to make > of making money, they don’t <matter> care about their employees' <the> working-conditions <of> .Their only aim is to earn a maximum of money, it’s become an obsession. However, what is it used for ? Maybe to buy a big house, to make a lot of travels, to have a nice car... But as we/they say « Money doesn’t make happiness ».