Correction " English Writing"

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Bonjour, voilà une lettre en anglais faite par moi donc il y a forcément des fautes .. Merci de me la corriger ou modifier là où sa va pas svp

Dear Carole,

It was kind of you to write to me.

I think that you don't receive enough of pocket money.

Me, I get between 5 en 10 euro per week .

I always get pocket money from my parents but I get it too on my birthday from my godfather or my grandparents.

Last year I bought a new mobile thanks to a student's job.

If I were you, I'd save more or you could sell your old mobile.

When you'll come from the airport I would wear a jeans whit a shirt white. I had my hair cut and dyed in blond. I wait your photo recent . I'm in a hurry to see you at the airport . One will be able gone to make shopping , there will be promotions it is necessary to benefit from it !

I'm certain that your parents will not make the skinflints.

You'll see, in Belgium, it rains much but there is full with superb things to make !

Evelyne

[yveslouis]

Bonjour, voilà une lettre en anglais faite par moi donc il y a forcément des fautes .. Merci de me la corriger ou modifier là où sa va pas svp

Dear Carole,

It was kind of you to write to me.

I think that you don't receive get enough of pocket money.

Me, I get between 5 en to 10 euros per a week .

I always get pocket money from my parents but I also get it too on my birthday from my godfather or my grandparents.

Last year I bought a new mobile thanks to a student's job.

If I were you, I'd save more or you could sell your old mobile.

When you'll come from arrive at the airport, I would wear a will be wearing white jeans whit and a white shirt white. I had my hair cut and dyed in blond. I am waiting for your recent photo recent . I 'm in a hurry just can't wait to see you at the airport . One will We'll be able gone to make go shopping , there will be promotions; it is necessary to benefit from it !

I'm certain that your parents will not make the be skinflints.

You'll see, in Belgium, it rains much a lot but there is full with superb are plenty of things to make do !

Evelyne