Besoin D'une Correction

[albert84]

salut a tous je dois rendre un essai mais j'aimerai bien ne pas le rendre rempli de faute.Si qqn peux me corriger c'est vraiment sympa.merci par avance.

Every persons from different countries, which have different origins, have values and norms which their are clean, therefore not inevitably common.

In my study, we are going to see if it is simple for persons of different communities to accept values which their are not common.

For it we are going to see on the one hand when it is simple, and on the other hand where this is not her. It is easy for persons coming from other communities to accept other values: indeed in countries Africans, the women are not respected, they are not equal to the men.

While when they come in France, there is no more this difference, the women live it better, and there is the respect for others.

Furthermore English, who come to work in France or to eat, will not feel pain to accept values, traditions, because they are accustomed to it: there is not time difference, they eat the same thing, therefore in these present cases it is easy to filt in.

We have just seen that when they have the same way of life, as they adapt and adopt the values of a group, it is easy to integrate and to belong to another community. However, for certain communities, it is very difficult to accept other stocks, we are going to study examples.

By examples, the Muslims have no same religious practices as the Catholics: they do not eat pig, they make the Ramadan, the women carry the veil, while in France there are debates on the carry of the veil in the school.

Besides, French one going to another country will not be respected out of necessity as in his natal country. We can say that what is hard is especially the study of the language: it makes a certain time to be understood and understand the others.

To conclude, everything depends on our country of origin, of values and traditions which they have, to accept easily other values.

[yveslouis]

Bonjour.

Tu as traduit "qui leur sont propres" par "which their are clean".

En fait, c'est un traducteur automatique qui l'a fait pour toi.

Quand comprendrez-vous (toi et les autres) qu'il faut rédiger son texte directement en anglais et que nous ne sommes pas dupes de vos traductions "bidon".

Si tu veux progresser (mais le veux-tu vraiment ?), il te faudra du travail, encore et toujours. Alors, nous serons là pour t'aider.

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[albert84]

Bonjour.

Tu as traduit "qui leur sont propres" par "which their are clean".

En fait, c'est un traducteur automatique qui l'a fait pour toi.

Quand comprendrez-vous (toi et les autres) qu'il faut rédiger son texte directement en anglais et que nous ne sommes pas dupes de vos traductions "bidon".

Si tu veux progresser (mais le veux-tu vraiment ?), il te faudra du travail, encore et toujours. Alors, nous serons là pour t'aider.

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