Rédaction Sur L'apprentissage D'un Langage

[CarenHermy]

Bonjour,

J'ai encore une rédaction à faire dont le sujet est : "Do you think learning a language requires a teacher ?"

Comme avant, j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur mon travail et mettre mes erreurs en avant sans les corriger s'il vous plait.

Merci d'avance :

Nowadays, as a consequence of globalization, more and more people want or have to learn a new language or several. For this, they have various methods such as teachers, the internet or books. But, does learning a language require a teacher? I believe that learning a language does require a teacher. (je ne sais pas trop quoi mettre ici, je trouve que ça fait un peu redondance avec la problématique)

For many people, learning a language with a teacher is considered as the best method because it is a real exchange between two people. It is not as dull as being alone in front of a book and it is much more motivating.

A teacher is nearly mandatory because she brings you all the knowledge and adapts the class according to you. He/she is able to see what has to be revised or improved to speak better.

Moreover, she/he is able to correct your accent, what some other methods cannot do. She/he teaches you the phonetics to make you get a better accent, and helps you to pronounce words perfectly because he/she knows all the subtleties of the language learnt. It is not a stereotyped accent recorded on those CDs sold, it’s a pure one learnt in the country.

In a nutshell, we can say that a teacher is highly recommended to learn a new language because it brings a lot that the other new methods do not. It would be interesting to wonder what is worth the learning of a language thanks to the internet.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Nowadays, as a consequence of globalization, more and more people want or have to learn a new language or several. <For this>,<=Il y a mieux comme formulation, ie In order to do so, they have various methods such as teachers, the Internet or books. But, does learning a language require a teacher? I believe that learning a language does require a teacher. (je ne sais pas trop quoi mettre ici, je trouve que ça fait un peu redondance avec la problématique) <Tu pourrais reformuler la phrase différemment, ie I believe a teacher is necessary to learn a language. Bof, je sais, pas terrible, mais ça évite une répétition trop évidente.

For many people, learning a language with a teacher is considered as the best method because it is a real exchange between two people. It is not as dull as being alone in front of a book and it is much more motivating.

A teacher is nearly mandatory because she<(Serais-tu sexiste ? ) brings you all the knowledge and adapts the class according to you. He/she is able to see what has to be revised or improved to speak better.

Moreover, she/he is able to correct your accent, what some<(?!) other methods cannot do. She/he teaches you the phonetics to make you get a better accent, and helps you (to) pronounce words perfectly because he/she knows all the subtleties of the language learnt. It is not a stereotyped accent recorded on those CDs sold, it's a pure one learnt in the country.

In a nutshell, we can say that a teacher is highly recommended to learn a new language because it brings a lot that the other new methods do not. It would be interesting to wonder what is worth<(Attention, c'est une interrogation indirecte) the learning of a language thanks to the Internet.

Bonne fin de dimanche.

[CarenHermy]

Hihi merci Oui je suis sexiste of course ^^. Tout tourne autour des hommes dans notre monde, il fait bien échanger les rôles parfois ! Non, je plaisante, juste un petit oubli de ma part. Merci !

[Jean B]

Hihi merci Oui je suis sexiste of course ^^. Tout tourne autour des hommes dans notre monde, il fait bien échanger les rôles parfois ! Non, je plaisante, juste un petit oubli de ma part. Merci !

[yveslouis]

Bonjour CarenHermy.

Je suis sûr que TA professeur(e)* d'anglais va être ravie de savoir qu'elle est indispensable pour l'apprentissage de l'anglais. Je suis simplement étonné que tu n'aies pas abordé le fait que des millions de gens ont appris une langue étrangère parce qu'ils sont allés habiter dans un pays étranger. Au hasard, les Etats-Unis. Ou la France, etc...

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*Pourquoi pas ? On dit bien "auteure", maintenant.

[CarenHermy]

Oui en effet anglais je n'y avait pas pensé. Notre professeurE nous parle tellement de "globalization" que j'oublie presque la moitié de ce qu'il se passe autour ^^ !

Pour JRB et anglais : Vous êtes prof d'anglais :g ?

[CarenHermy]

Au fait, pour la dernière phrase, c'est ça : It would be interesting to wonder what the learning of a language thanks to the Internet is worth ?

Merci

[Jean B]

Au fait, pour la dernière phrase, c'est ça : It would be interesting to wonder what the learning of a language thanks to the Internet is worth ?

Merci

[yveslouis]

une professeur...!

[yveslouis]

Pour JRB et anglais : Vous êtes prof d'anglais :g ?

[Jean B]

Sky! We have been pierced at day!...