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[athasia]

la question est to what extent are their live "simple livers, cette question est la plus importante,amors si vous pouvez m'aider, me mettre ce que vous pensez

par rapport à cette qestion et le texte en fait,j aimerais,si vous savaais que vous pauffiniez,jai fait et refait et donc maintenant j aimerai le trucspresque parfais, vous comprenez, c'est un texte que je dois préparer pour l'examen et je suis tres embetée si vous ne maidez pas, les années précedentes, grace à vous j'ai eu mes modules d'anglais, c'est pour cela que je reviens vous voir ma réponse est en dessous du texte

bises bon dimabcheit's very urgent

LE TEXTE SIMPLE LIVING

Lynn Kidder had two jobs _computer programming and teaching the piano. She and her husband earned 2,700 a month, but there were too busy to be happy it. Lynn wanted to play the piano, not teach it. SO, they took a course in voluntary simplicity. They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings. After four years of voluntary simplicity, they gave up all their jobs and joined the new leisured class.

The newly leisured call themselves downshifters. Nobody knows how many there are, or whether insecurity, stress or ecological concern is their main motive. But Lynn Kidder is sure the movment is "speading wildly, recognised as a smarter way to live. You make space in your life for what you really car about".

The apprentice downsizer's firts task its'Find out how much money you have earned in your life and compare it with what you've got now" . Step 2 is to work out your net hourly wage, keep track of every cent you spend and ask: "Did I get fulfilment, satisfaction or value in proportion to the energy spent? Souldn't I choose quality of life over standard of living"

The advice is:buy what you need and don't go"shopping"; service your appliances, do it yourself, buy in on sales_provided it's something your really need or want, buy used; don't go into debt on credit cards, walk and cycle.

Downshifters predict that a less consumerist future will restore a sense of community. As the movment spreads, there will be more people per household goods, , more coorporation in repairing household goods, more car pools and tool sharing. Through simple living people are not-dropping out,they are actually dropping in: to community, to family, to relashionships.

Refugees from hzrd life find work better on the other side. At Charlene MacMahonwrote in "the SEATTLE'S SIMPLE LIVING "NEWSLETTER:

"when you simplify your life, you do fewer of the things yyou don't like to do. Your nurture only those people and relashionships which enhance your life. This is not about deprivation_this is about choice"

MA nouvelle réponse

Downshifters don't "wonder whether they have got enough satisfaction in the proportion of the energy they've spent", they consciously decide to earn less, spend less, and focus on what is really important to them. They focus on value, not on price. They value non-material things, such as community.

Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si j'ai bien répondu , mais peut être que mes phrases sont mal formulées, pouvez vous maider pour cette question sil vous plait

La question est What did their course in Volontary Simplicity teach them about 25 WORDS je répondrai They can do fewer of the things they don't like to do. next the nurturThey lear to live simple

MA nouvelle réponse

Downshifters don't "wonder whether they have got enough satisfaction in the proportion of the energy they've spent", they consciously decide to earn less, spend less, and focus on what is really important to them. They focus on value, not on price. They value non-material things, such as community.

Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si j'ai bien répondu , mais peut être que mes phrases sont mal formulées, pouvez vous maider pour cette question sil vous plait

La question est What did their course in Volontary Simplicity teach them about 25 WORDS je répondrai They can do fewer of the things they don't like to do. next the nurturThey lear to live simple

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[athasia]

j'ai répondu à la question

Cest bon avec vos aide, j'ai répondu à la question suivante ,et cependant j'aimerais votre avis

To what extent are their live "simple" lifes, jen ai pas mis assez de mots et est correct, dans l'attente e votre correction, après je ne vous embete plus après ,c'st promis

People decide to adopt a new way of living.It's not a materialist lifestyle It is the new leisure class. They live as simple as possible. They want to protect the environment.

LA question:To what extent (dans quelle mesure) are their live "simple" lives? LA question:To what extent (dans quelle mesure) are their live "simple" lives? c'est ca qu il faut répondre

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Lynn Kidder had two jobs _computer programming and teaching the piano. She and her husband earned 2,700 a month, but there were too busy to be happy it. Lynn wanted to play the piano, not teach it. SO, they took a course in voluntary simplicity. They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings. After four years of voluntary simplicity, they gave up all their jobs and joined the new leisured class.

The newly leisured call themselves downshifters. Nobody knows how many there are, or whether insecurity, stress or ecological concern is their main motive. But Lynn Kidder is sure the movment is “speading wildly, recognised as a smarter way to live. You make space in your life for what you really car about”.

The apprentice downsizer’s firts task its’Find out how much money you have earned in your life and compare it with what you’ve got now” . Step 2 is to work out your net hourly wage, keep track of every cent you spend and ask: “Did I get fulfilment, satisfaction or value in proportion to the energy spent? Souldn’t I choose quality of life over standard of living”?

The advice is:buy what you need and don’t go”shopping”; service your appliances, do it yourself, buy in on sales_provided it’s something your really need or want, buy used; don’t go into debt on credit cards, walk and cycle.

Downshifters predict that a less consumerist future will restore a sense of community. As the movment spreads, there will be more people per household goods, , more coorporation in repairing household goods, more car pools and tool sharing. Through simple living people are not-dropping out,they are actually dropping in: to community, to family, to relashionships.

Refugees from hard life find work better on the other side. At Charlene MacMahonwrote in “the SEATTLE’S SIMPLE LIVING “NEWSLETTER:

“when you simplify your life, you do fewer of the things yyou don’t like to do. Your nurture only those people and relashionships which enhance your life. This is not about deprivation_this is about choice”

, WALTER SCHVARZ , in the garden weekly

Si vous pouvez m'accorder une dernière fois votre contribution et votre aide

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[athasia]

ma new présentation

REbonsoir,

j'espère que j'ai mieux répondu, can you help more now if you want, i hope you will help me bise. J'ai mis en francais, ce que je veux dire au cas on m'on anglais is bad, le text estci dessous et ma réponse aussi please,help me now for the last question

Their live more simple.

les gens choisissent ce type de vie pour simplifier leur existence pour favoriser une plus grande qualité de vie. Ils font ces choix pour des raisons fort diverses : endettement, course folle, surconsommation, crise écologique, solidarité sociale, etc.

people choose this type of life to simplify their existence to favour a bigger quality of life. They make these choices for very much various reasons: debt, mad running, overconsumption, environmental crisis, social solidarity, etc.

C'est un choix conscient qui vise à se libérer du temps et de l'espace pour vivre dans la sobriété matérielle, l'harmonie relationnelle et la simplicité spirituelle.

These is a conscious choice which aims at being released from time and space to live in material sobriety, the relational harmony and spiritual simplicity

Cette sobriété heureuse répond à des motivations diverses qui se complètent :

- Sortir de la précarité, de l’endettement, de la surconsommation pour retrouver un équilibre financier acceptable

- Ralentir et s'octroyer du temps pour vivre nos passions et nos relations

- Promouvoir par nos choix de consommation ou de non consommation un modèle économique respectueux des personnes et de tout ce qui vit sur la Terre.

Quitter le schéma du "avoir plus" pour aller vers le "vivre mieux"

This happy sobriety aims at various objectives which are complementary:

- To leave precariousness, the debt, overconsumption to find an acceptable financial balance

- To slow down and grant time to live our passions and our relations

- To promote by our choices of consumption or nonconsumption a respectful economic model of the people and of all that lives on the Earth.

To leave the diagram of “having” to go more towards the “food better

l'avantage le plus recherché est de décroître sa dépendance à l'argent ce qui implique une baisse de stress. Le simplicitaire peut donc se permettre de travailler moins et d'avoir plus de temps pour lui.

The possible advantages of that or that which practises voluntary simplicity are numerous

the most required advantage is to decrease its dependence with the money what implies a fall of stress. The simplicitaire can thus be allowed to work less and to have more time for him.

The installation of voluntary simplicity for an individual can also increase his level of health. Indeed, the simplicitaire will seek to make more intelligent purchases and will banish,

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From: Leah30@neuf.fr

To: obviousa@hotmail.fr

Subject: Re: J'ai fait la présentation lus claire, comme tu m'as dit, j'espère que tu maideras plus maintenant bi

Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 08:26:31 +0100

Tu ne réponds pas vraiment à la question

To what extent are their live "simple" lifes : dans quelle mesure leurs vies sont-elles “simples”

People decide to adopt a new way of living. Les gens décident d'adopter un nouveau style de vie : ça ne montre pas que c'est une vie “simple”. Il faut commencer par “leurs vies sont simples, parce que...”

It is the new leisure class. Inutile ! ça ne répond pas à la question

They live as simple as possible.

Tu réponds quasiment : “leurs vies sont simples parce qu'elles sont simples” c'est, excuse-moi, idiot !

It's not a materialist lifestyle - They want to protect the environment. -They live altogather like a community.

Cherche d'autres éléments dans le texte, car tu ne réponds pas à “dans quelle mesure”

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From: albanne poncin

To: leah30@neuf.fr

Sent: Wednesday, March 26, 2008 9:54 PM

Subject: J'ai fait la présentation lus claire, comme tu m'as dit, j'espère que tu maideras plus maintenant bi

Bonsoir léah

je pense que j'ai présenté comme tu m'as dit, c'est vrai que j'ai été très brouillon dans mes présentation de questions...Tu sais que dans ma vie, c'est pareil, je suis brouillon et cela se voit

Pour cette question , précédement, tu m'avais parlé de :It is the new leisure class .

la question est la suivante ,et cependant j'aimerais ton avis

To what extent are their live "simple" lifes, jen ai pas mis assez de mots et est correct, dans l'attente de ta réponse correction, après je ne t'embete plus après ,c'est promis

Ma réponse:People decide to adopt a new way of living.It's not a materialist lifestyle It is the new leisure class. They live as simple as possible. They want to protect the environment. Their live altogather like a community.

c'est ca qu il faut répondre? J'espère vivement que tu me reppondras maintenant, ce sera ma dernière question alors si tu peux m'aider plus...dans l'attente de de ton message.

Après,je ne viens plus t' embeter, exceptionnellement, accorder moi ta réponse, te remerciant par avance

Je te remets le texte pour être sure? bises

Text is:

Lynn Kidder had two jobs _computer programming and teaching the piano. She and her husband earned 2,700 a month, but there were too busy to be happy it. Lynn wanted to play the piano, not teach it. SO, they took a course in voluntary simplicity. They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings. After four years of voluntary simplicity, they gave up all their jobs and joined the new leisured class.

The newly leisured call themselves downshifters. Nobody knows how many there are, or whether insecurity, stress or ecological concern is their main motive. But Lynn Kidder is sure the movment is “speading wildly, recognised as a smarter way to live. You make space in your life for what you really car about”.

The apprentice downsizer’s firts task its’Find out how much money you have earned in your life and compare it with what you’ve got now” . Step 2 is to work out your net hourly wage, keep track of every cent you spend and ask: “Did I get fulfilment, satisfaction or value in proportion to the energy spent? Shouldn’t I choose quality of life over standard of living”?

The advice is:buy what you need and don’t go”shopping”; service your appliances, do it yourself, buy in on sales_provided it’s something your really need or want, buy used; don’t go into debt on credit cards, walk and cycle.

Downshifters predict that a less consumerist future will restore a sense of community. As the movment spreads, there will be more people per household goods, , more coorporation in repairing household goods, more car pools and tool sharing. Through simple living people are not-dropping out,they are actually dropping in: to community, to family, to relashionships.

Refugees from hard life find work better on the other side. At Charlene MacMahonwrote in “the SEATTLE’S SIMPLE LIVING “NEWSLETTER:

“when you simplify your life, you do fewer of the things yyou don’t like to do. Your nurture only those people and relashionships which enhance your life. This is not about deprivation_this is about choice”

, WALTER SCHVARZ , in the garden weekly

by j'attends votre aide, maintenant que ma réponse est pls adaptée

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