Un Petit Eclaircissement In English

[athasia]

coucou pour etre plus claire je vous remets tout, car je vous ai mis deux question precedemment et je mélange

Hello, j'ai tout réecris et suis plus claire for my answer. Si vous pouvez m 'aider mainenant que je suis plus claire pour cette question je dois écrire en 40 et moi,j 'en ai 30 et il faut 25 motsdonc, si vous pouvez me venir en aide, ce serait sympa de votre part , surtout si vous savez lol

VOICI LE TEXTE SIMPLE LIVING c'est le bon texte maintenant je répondrais ceci

DOWNSHIFTERS USUALLY TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THE REDUCTION OF THEIR NEED FOR PURCHASED SERVICES OR GOODS. THEY WONDER WHETHER THEY HAVE GOT ENOUGH SATISFACTION IN PROPORTION TO THE ENERGY THEY'VE SPENT. (30 mots) DOWNSHIFTERS USUALLY TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THE REDUCTION OF THEIR NEED FOR PURCHASED SERVICES OR GOODS. THEY WONDER (Jai écris certain trucs en majuscules pour mettre en valeur;je ne crie pas :)WHETHER THEY HAVE GOT ENOUGH SATISFACTION IN PROPORTION TO THE ENERGY THEY'VE SPENT

LA QUESTION EST donc la suivante: Which elements do downshifters usually take into account? pouvez vous jeter un coup d'oeil

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Lynn Kidder had two jobs _computer programming and teaching the piano. She and her husband earned 2,700 a month, but there were too busy to be happy it. Lynn wanted to play the piano, not teach it. SO, they took a course in voluntary simplicity. They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings. After four years of voluntary simplicity, they gave up all their jobs and joined the new leisured class.

The newly leisured call themselves downshifters. Nobody knows how many there are, or whether insecurity, stress or ecological concern is their main motive. But Lynn Kidder is sure the movment is “speading wildly, recognised as a smarter way to live. You make space in your life for what you really car about”.

The apprentice downsizer’s firts task its’Find out how much money you have earned in your life and compare it with what you’ve got now” . Step 2 is to work out your net hourly wage, keep track of every cent you spend and ask: “Did I get fulfilment, satisfaction or value in proportion to the energy spent? Souldn’t I choose quality of life over standard of living”?

The advice is:buy what you need and don’t go”shopping”; service your appliances, do it yourself, buy in on sales_provided it’s something your really need or want, buy used; don’t go into debt on credit cards, walk and cycle.

Downshifters predict that a less consumerist future will restore a sense of community. As the movment spreads, there will be more people per household goods, , more coorporation in repairing household goods, more car pools and tool sharing. Through simple living people are not-dropping out,they are actually dropping in: to community, to family, to relashionships.

Refugees from hard life find work better on the other side. At Charlene MacMahonwrote in “the SEATTLE’S SIMPLE LIVING “NEWSLETTER:

“when you simplify your life, you do fewer of the things yyou don’t like to do. Your nurture only those people and relashionships which enhance your life. This is not about deprivation_this is about choice”

, WALTER SCHVARZ , in the garden weekly

bon week end et bonne paques

[yveslouis]

Décidément, Athasia ( = Obviousa), tu as tendance à envahir les sites d'aide. Il est inutile de poster 20 fois les mêmes demandes, d'autant plus que tu ne tiens généralement pas compte des corretions qui te sont données.

En ce qui me concerne, je dis 'pouce!".

[athasia]

En fait, oui,je suis sur plusieurs forum,mais, avec vos conseils,je refais mes réponses pour avoir un correction et à chaque fois je fais un nouveau post, ce qu'il c'est passé , c'est que je me suis mélangé les pédales avec mes questions d'anglais, cependant pourrais tu me dire, si tu sais, si j'ai bien répondu ci dessus ou mal répondu, si tel est le cas,,me donner un coup de main serait sympa,effectivement,je dois préparer ce texte pour mon examen,j'ai préparé mes autres textes, j'avoue que sur ce dernier texte,j'aimerai faire des réponses plus précises que dans mes textesprécédents, car j'apprends par coeur, c'est pour l'oral,

Bon mardi

Décidément, Athasia ( = Obviousa), tu as tendance à envahir les sites d'aide. Il est inutile de poster 20 fois les mêmes demandes, d'autant plus que tu ne tiens généralement pas compte des corretions qui te sont données.

En ce qui me concerne, je dis 'pouce!".