Can You Correct Me For 2 Exercices

[athasia]

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Question A/What did their course in Volontary Simplicity teach them about 25 WORDS

je répondrai They can do fewer of the things they don't like to do. next the nurturThey lear to live simple

Il y a en dessous du texte une autre question peut etre que j'ai mieux répondu

LE TEXTE SIMPLE LIVING

Lynn Kidder had two jobs _computer programming and teaching the piano. She and her husband earned 2,700 a month, but there were too busy to be happy it. Lynn wanted to play the piano, not teach it. SO, they took a course in voluntary simplicity. They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings. After four years of voluntary simplicity, they gave up all their jobs and joined the new leisured class.

The newly leisured call themselves downshifters. Nobody knows how many there are, or whether insecurity, stress or ecological concern is their main motive. But Lynn Kidder is sure the movment is “speading wildly, recognised as a smarter way to live. You make space in your life for what you really car about”.

The apprentice downsizer’s firts task its’Find out how much money you have earned in your life and compare it with what you’ve got now” . Step 2 is to work out your net hourly wage, keep track of every cent you spend and ask: “Did I get fulfilment, satisfaction or value in proportion to the energy spent? Souldn’t I choose quality of life over standard of living”

The advice is:buy what you need and don’t go”shopping”; service your appliances, do it yourself, buy in on sales_provided it’s something your really need or want, buy used; don’t go into debt on credit cards, walk and cycle.

Downshifters predict that a less consumerist future will restore a sense of community. As the movment spreads, there will be more people per household goods, , more coorporation in repairing household goods, more car pools and tool sharing. Through simple living people are not-dropping out,they are actually dropping in: to community, to family, to relashionships.

Refugees from hzrd life find work better on the other side. At Charlene MacMahonwrote in “the SEATTLE’S SIMPLE LIVING “NEWSLETTER:

“when you simplify your life, you do fewer of the things yyou don’t like to do. Your nurture only those people and relashionships which enhance your life. This is not about deprivation_this is about choice”

, WALTER SCHVARZ? , in the garden weekly

Et ausi pour cette question B/ Which elements do downshifter usually take into account je repondrai cececi reduce their need for purchased services or goods and, by extension, their need to sell their time for money. Some will spend the extra free time this generates helping their family or others in a voluntary way. During the holiday season, such people often perform alternative giving. Others may spend the extra free time to improve their own quality of life, for example pursuing creative activities such as art and craft.

is a lifestyle in which individuals consciously choose to minimize the 'more-is-better' pursuit of wealth and consumption. Adherents choose simple living for a variety of reasons, including spirituality, health, increase in 'quality time' for family and friends, stress reduction, conservation, social justice or anti-consumerism, while others choose to live more simply for reasons of personal taste or personal economy par contre il a trop de mots mais c'est trop long il faut juste écrire en 25 mots pouvez vous m'aicler

[yveslouis]

Tout cela me semble bien embrouillé...

Que penser de cette phrase, par exemple :

"They can do fewer of the things they don't like to do. next the nurturThey lear to live simple".

Y aurait-il eu un copier-coller malencontreux ? Car la fin ne veut rien dire.

Contente-toi du début : "They can do fewer of the things they don't like to do."

Ajoute, pour faire bonne mesure :"They learned how to cut their spending and make the most of their savings."

Pour la deuxième question, il faut faire un travail de détective pour trouver où elle se situe ainsi que la réponse que tu lui apportes.

"Which elements do downshifter usually take into account je repondrai cececi reduce their need for purchased services or goods and, by extension, their need to sell their time for money. Some will spend the extra free time this generates helping their family or others in a voluntary way. During the holiday season, such people often perform alternative giving. Others may spend the extra free time to improve their own quality of life, for example pursuing creative activities such as art and craft.

is a lifestyle in which individuals consciously choose to minimize the 'more-is-better' pursuit of wealth and consumption. Adherents choose simple living for a variety of reasons, including spirituality, health, increase in 'quality time' for family and friends, stress reduction, conservation, social justice or anti-consumerism, while others choose to live more simply for reasons of personal taste or personal economy par contre il a trop de mots mais c'est trop long il faut juste écrire en 25 mots pouvez vous m'aicler

Je veux bien essayer de t'aicler DOWNSHIFTERS USUALLY TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THE REDUCTION OF THEIR NEED FOR PURCHASED SERVICES OR GOODS. THEY WONDER WHETHER THEY HAVE GOT ENOUGH SATISFACTION IN PROPORTION TO THE ENERGY THEY'VE SPENT. (30 mots)

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