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[aurore268]

I love holidays ,it has it full of god things a to eat as of the patty foix, the suinea hen,salmon, snails,shrimps and the dessert a log good

I prefer eaten by the fish that the meat because

I love all this comes of her mer

from the home they buy no things or of preserved food and they make many exercices

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[McFLY27]

I love holidays ,it has it full of god things a to eat as of the patty foix, the suinea hen,salmon, snails,shrimps and the dessert a log good

I prefer eaten by the fish that the meat because

I love all this comes of her mer

from the home they buy no things or of preserved food and they make many exercices

pouvez vous m'aider a corriger

[yveslouis]

Ci-dessous, quelques modifications. Il semble que tu aies du pain sur la planche pour parvenir à un résultat correct en anglais...

<...> = à supprimer.

MAJUSCULES = à ajouter.

(...) = remarques/autre proposition.

I love holidays.(Il faut finir la phrase ici.) <,it has it full> THERE ARE PLENTY of goOd things <a> to eat <as of > LIKE <the patty foix> LIVER PATÉ, <the suinea hen> GUINEA FOWL, salmon, snails, shrimps and, <the> FOR dessert, <a log good> AN (ICE-CREAM) YULE LOG. [(Bûche (glacée)]

I prefer <eaten by the> EATING fish <that the> THAN meat because I love all <this> THAT ("that" obligatoire après ""all") comes <of her mer> FROM THE SEA.

from the home they buy no things or of preserved food and they make many exercices (Je ne comprends pas cette phrase. Peut-être as-tu voulu dire : "At home, they don't buy anything but preserved food and they don't take any exercise." )

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