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Bonjour à tous, je dois répondre à cette question "Do you think it is possible to ignore our consumer society ?"

voici ma réponse : In my opinion, in the rich countries, people can't resist to our consumer society because commercials influence us. They create many new needs. So, we changed our style of life. For example, many people need cars to go to their job. Other people influence us. We want to be the most beautiful, the most fashionable.

But, if you want to be not influence to the consumer society, you must to live on the fringes of society. You must to live on yourself. You live as Indians or cowboys in a farm.

It's difficult to escape from our consumer society.

Merci de me corriger mes fautes.

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Bonjour à tous, je dois répondre à cette question "Do you think it is possible to ignore our consumer society ?"

voici ma réponse : In my opinion, in the rich countries, people can't resist to our consumer society because commercials influence us. They create many new needs. So, we changed our style of life. For example, many people need cars to go to their job. Other people influence us. We want to be the most beautiful, the most fashionable.

But, if you want to be not influence to the consumer society, you must to live on the fringes of society. You must to live on yourself. You live as Indians or cowboys in a farm.

It's difficult to escape from our consumer society.

Merci de me corriger mes fautes.

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Hemmo!

In my opinion, in the rich countries, people can't resist <to> our consumer society because commercials influence us/THEM. They create many new needs. So, we HAVE changed our <style> WAY of life. For example, many people need cars to go to their jobS (/ TO GO TO WORK). Other people influence us (Can you precise?). We want to be the most beautiful ONES, the most fashionable ONES (On emploie RAREMENT un adjectif avec la fonction d'un nom en anglais).

But, if you DON'T want to be <not> influenceD <to> BY the consumer society, you must <to> (Faute TRES grave : jamais de "to" après un modal !) live on the fringes of society. You must <to> live <on> BY yourself. You MUST live <as> LIKE ("as" s'emploie pour comparer avec un verbe) Indians or cowboys <in> ON a farm.

It's difficult to escape <from> our consumer society.

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