Correction Pour Projet Technique

[gazgoulette971]

Bonjour,

J'aurais besoin d'un ti peu d'aide car j'ai un rapport à rendre en anglais mais mon niveau en anglais n'est pas vraiment élevé. Je voudrais savoir s'il vous serait possible de me dire quelles fautes j'ai faites dans l'extrait que je vous envoie. Il y a des phrases qui ne vont pas mais j'arrive pas à trouver les bonnes tournures

Merci d'avance

It was during the 20th century that the greatest development has taken place as much in the pharmaceutical fields as in the industrial, thanks to, in particular, the two world wars. However today the reheating of the planet is a major problem which, in the long term, will cause considerable damage. The major catastrophic climatic changes can be seen with the increase of the frequencies of tornados and hurricanes but also with the melting of the ice glaciers or the fall of the ground water level. Unless way of life changes it’s bound to happen.

[yveslouis]

Bonjour.

Je te propose quelques (rares) modifications.

<...> = à supprimer

MAJUSCULES = à ajouter

It was during the 20th century that the greatest development has taken (/TOOK) place as <much> WELL in the pharmaceutical fields as in the industrial ONES, thanks to THE TWO WORLD WARS, in particular. <, the two world wars>. However today the reheating/OVERHEATING of the planet is a major problem which, in the long term, will cause considerable damage. The major catastrophic climatic changes can be seen <with> IN the increase of the frequencies of tornados and hurricanes but also <with> IN the melting of the (ice) glaciers or the fall of the ground water level. Unless OUR way of life changes, it’s bound to happen.

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[gazgoulette971]

Merci beaucoup pour les corrections apportées.

J'ai continué d'écrire mon introduction mais j'ai encore quelques souci

Unless our way of life changes it’s bound to happen.

That’s why the wasting should be avoided, economies must be made, and the scientists must seek, more than ever, a solution. It’s seen to be that an excellent solution to thwart the climatic changes is to use renewable energy sources, on the one hand because they are natural and on the other hand because they are almost inexhaustible such as wind, sun and wood.

That’s why, for the technical project untitled “Alimentation d’un banc d’essai d’hélice”, ????

(nous nous sommes demandé comment, à partir du soleil et de l'énergie solaire pourrions nous faire tourner une hélice de ventilateur.) ??? j'arrive pas à aligner les mots pour faire une phrase

In order to answer this question, the project was broken up into several parts. First of all, we’re going to present you the principle of photovoltaic energy, then a global view of the subject with a description of the different component and lastly (je ne sais pas encore quelle sera la dernière partie).

merci d'avance

[yveslouis]

Hello!

Unless our way of life changes it’s bound to happen.

That’s why <the> wasting should be avoided, <economies> SAVINGS must/HAVE TO be made, and, MORE THAN EVER <the> scientists must/HAVE TO <seek> FIND <, more than ever,> a solution. It’s seen to be SEEMS TO ME (?) that an excellent solution to thwart <the> climatic changes is to use renewable energy sources SUCH AS WIND, SUN AND WOOD, on the one hand because they are natural and on the other hand because they are almost inexhaustible <such as wind, sun and wood>.

That’s why, for the technical project <untitled> NAMED “Alimentation d’un banc d’essai d’hélice”, WE WONDERED HOW WE COULD POSSIBLY MAKE A FAN PROPELLER TURN ROUND THANKS TO THE SUN AND SOLAR ENERGY.

???? (nous nous sommes demandé comment, à partir du soleil et de l'énergie solaire pourrions nous faire tourner une hélice de ventilateur.) ??? j'arrive pas à aligner les mots pour faire une phrase

In order to answer this question, the project was <broken up> SEPARATED into several parts. First of all, we’re going to present you the principle of photovoltaic energy, then a global view of the subject with a description of the different componentS and lastly (je ne sais pas encore quelle sera la dernière partie

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[gazgoulette971]

Thank you very much