anais121 Posté(e) le 1 octobre 2005 Signaler Posté(e) le 1 octobre 2005 j'aurais égalemant besoinde la correction de cet exos sur la 2ème partie de la phrase merci d'avance a) he had not set foot there for more than fifteen years= it was more than fifteen years ago that he setted his foot here before b)she had demolished most of the originel buildings.= most of the original buildings was destroyed by her having demolishing it c)perhaps he preferred drinking alcohol.=he was an alcoholic d)she could not conceal her contempt= she was not doing any effort to conceal her contempt e)I'll break your bloody legs if you don't leave my stock alone= unless you suck my leaves alone I'll break your bloody legs f) "you can't remember", she shouted that you couldn't be remembered g) why did I marry this woman?=he wondered why his woman was so dumb.
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 23 octobre 2005 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 23 octobre 2005 Regarde ma réponse postée sur le même sujet. Tu y verras tes erreurs. @ + Quelques indications : a) he had not set foot there for more than fifteen years= it was more than fifteen years ago that he setted his foot here before. le preterit de "set" est "set". b)she had demolished most of the originel buildings.= most of the original buildings was destroyed by her having demolishing it "buildings" est pluriel. "was" ne convient pas.. tu dis deux fois la même chose avec "testroyed" et "demolished" c)perhaps he preferred drinking alcohol.=he was an alcoholic Pourquoi pas ?! Mais on est loin du sens originel. d)she could not conceal her contempt= she was not doing any effort to conceal her contempt On peut faire des efforts et ne pas parvenir à faire quelque chose... e)I'll break your bloody legs if you don't leave my stock alone= unless you suck my leaves alone I'll break your bloody legs "leave" est un verbe. "My leaves" n'a aucun sens. f) "you can't remember", she shouted that you couldn't be remembered Le sujet "you" n'est pas le bon. Pourquoi introduire "be" ?! g) why did I marry this woman?=he wondered why his woman was so dumb. "his wife" serait mieux que "his woman". Pourquoi "dumb" ? Rien ne précise qu'elle est sourde... @ +
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