Corriger Mes Fautes D'anglais (important)

[didi10]

bonjour pouvez vous cooriger mes fautes d'anglais car je ne suis pas tres bonnes en anglais . merci beaucoup

Slavery and human cruelty existed since centuries. But all these atrocities were denounced what caused the many ones change. Then why the song strange fruit is a declaration of war and a beginning of the movement of civic rights

Via this poem the author denounces cruelty people of the south has through various metaphors show of it that the state of the south in its scenes of campaigns made push strange fruit trees, fruit representatives hung black men and atrociously flaring by people of south, that even the perfume of the magniolia could not hide. Thus declaration of war of the south towards north refusing the image given, and the idea of a state sovereign with the same equality enters the coloured men and the men white.

In a word this text denounces human cruelty towards blacks, it is a declaration of war because the author dared to denounce the horror who existed in the beautiful landscapes of the south, and much did not accept this denunciation of north. Thus there is declaration of war between north and south. And it is the beginning of the movement of the civic rights bus will be first time that one will defend the rights of the blacks and the défendres.

merci de votre aide

[yveslouis]

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Slavery and human cruelty HAS existed <since> FOR centuries. But all these atrocities were denounced

what caused the many ones change.

Je ne comprends pas le sens de ce passage. Peut-être "which caused a lot of changes"

Then why the song strange fruit is a declaration of war and a beginning of the movement of civic rights

La construction n'est pas bonne : ...why IS the song strange fruit <is>...

Via this poem the author denounces cruelty people of the south has through various metaphors show of it that the state of the south in its scenes of campaigns made push strange fruit trees, fruit representatives hung black men and atrociously flaring by people of south, that even the perfume of the magniolia could not hide.

Une phrase de 4 lignes ! Wouaahhh ! Essaie de faire des phrases plus courtes, tu risqueras moins de faire des fautes de construction.

Impossible à corriger pour moi !

Thus declaration of war of the south towards north refusing the image given, and the idea of a state sovereign with the same equality enters the coloured men and the men white.

Entre autres :

...sovereign state...

"between" à la place de "enters"

pas d'article devant "coloured" et "white men" (Article tj avant le nom.)

In a word this text denounces human cruelty towards THE blacks, it is a declaration of war because the author dared to denounce the horror <who> WHICH existed in the beautiful landscapes of the south, and <much> MANY did not accept this denunciation of north. Thus there is declaration of war between north and south. And it is the beginning of the movement of the civic rights

bus will be first time that one will defend the rights of the blacks and the défendres.

Je ne comprends pas bien ce passage.

"bus ???" peut-être "but it..."

...and defend them. (mais la chose est dite deux fois, alors.)

@ + )