Biographie

[arafrogala]

salut

J'aurais besoin d'aide !!!

We see him in Steamboat Willie in 1928 for the first time. It's his creator who let his voice in the first speaking animation. His succes is immediate and he will be the hero of more 300 movies. He become a mondial symbol, he is used in several drifting things in particular in the toys. He isn't died.

Who is he ?

alors vous trouver qui il est ???

et est-ce que c'est gramaticalement correct ???

Arafrogala

[arafrogala]

c'est encore moi

ca serai bien que j'ai ne serai ce qu'une petite réponse même si vous ne voyez pas qui c'est pouvez vous me dire s'il y a de grosses fautes SVP

[yveslouis]

We see him in Steamboat Willie in 1928 for the first time. It's his creator who let his voice in the first speaking animation. His succes is immediate and he will be the hero of more 300 movies. He become a mondial symbol, he is used in several drifting things in particular in the toys. He isn't died.

Je ne vois pas qui c'est. Je te propose quelques modifications, si ce n'est pas trop tard...

...success was...

...of more than 300...

He has become...

...toys in particular...

He isn't dead.

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[arafrogala]

merci c'est un peu tard mais c'est pas grave du tout ça me fais plaisir d'avoir eu une réponse

[easythomas]

Moi j'aurais plutôt dit, sans trop modifier ton paragraphe :

He appeared for the first time in the film "Steamboat Willie" in 1928. His original creator let him his voice in his/the first speaking animation film. His success was immediate and he will be the main character of more than 300 movies. He will become a mondial symbol, and will be used in several drifting things, particular toys. He isn't died.

Who's ?

Surligner : Mickey, of course