Expression écrite En Anglais

[lilette07]

pourriez vous m'aider à rédiger une expression écrite d'environ 200 mots sur le sujet suivant svp : "being to start a new life is always very exciting"

ca serait vraiment génial si vous pourriez m'aider car je suis nulle en anglais

merci bcp d'avance

[Hopeless]

It is commonly said that it is exciting to start a new life.

Everyone is confronted with difficult choices in his life sooner or later. Sometimes we have to make important decisions which make us start a new life.

Though it might seem exciting, I think it is rather disquieting than exciting. We don't know how we could figure out of difficult situations. We don't know what might happen. Everything would not be the same as before. We might feel lost in nowhere !

However, it might look exciting if we like to be surprise. Starting a new life makes us different because we won't meet the same person as before. Thus, we will see others point of view when we meet different people. It makes us see thing from another view.

Moreover if we feel tired of our current life, it might put new life into our mind !

Starting a new life is like changing of skin. But are we likely to forget our past ? I think we may move to another city, meet other people. But one's life is printed in one's spirit, and it seems difficult to erase it.

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Je garanti pas qu'il n'y a pas de faute ( il doit en voir sans doute ! ).

D'ailleurs, si quelqu'un pourrait corriger ce que j'ai écris.. merci d'avance !

Hopeless.

[lilette07]

merci bcp de m'avoir aidé

[Hopeless]

Si tu pourrais poster la correction une fois que ton prof te l'aura rendue, ca me ferai plaisir

[lilette07]

ok pas de problème