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[roby67]

Bonjour

Pouvez vous me corriger ce petit texte. Merci d'avance

 

Dear M Johnson

I would to create one market every morning once monday. You can find owner vegetables and fruits. Many people believe this are better for the health and you can live longer. Markets give space to community groups and you can have good advice. Organic vegetable and local product are better and fresher. The foods are tastier because is harmful chemicals.

In my opinion create a local store in our company is my best opinion.

 

 

Best Regards

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Dear M Johnson,

I would like (1) to create one (2) a market every morning once monday. (3) You can find owner market gardener (4) vegetables and fruits. Many people believe this (5) these are better for the health and you can live longer. Markets give space to community groups and you can have good advice. Organic vegetables and local products are better and fresher. The foods are tastier because is they are free from (6) harmful chemicals.

In my opinion creating (7) a local store in our company is my best opinion solution.

(1)  l'auxiliaire would seul ne signifie rien. Il sert à conjuguer le verbe qui le suit au conditionnel. =>> I would like = J'aimerais/Je souhaiterais

(2) Ne confonds plus one/un, le numéral avec a/an/un l'indéfini.

(3) Ce que j'ai mis en rouge est carrément impossible. Je te mets au défi de créer un marché "tous les jours une fois le lundi" ! ? Relis-toi donc ! NB En anglais, les jours de la semaine prennent tous une majuscule, mémorise-le.

(4) market gardener = horticulteur/maraîcher

(5) this + nom singulier vs these + nom pluriel

(6) free from = exempts de/sans

(7) Seul le gérondif (V-ing) peut prendre la fonction sujet d'un verbe, l'infinitif jamais.

La prochaine fois que tu demanderas une correction de devoir, donnes-en le sujet car j'ai largement dépassé l'âge de jouer aux devinettes.