Corriger trois phrases

[roby67]

bonjour pouvez vous me corriger ses 3 phrases merci d'avance

 

1)      How were the seller payed if their goals are  reached ?

2)      Do we have enough possibility to open many stores in china?

3)       What are the aids marketing to reach the target of 10 million turnover (chiffre d’affaire)  in 2008.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Il y a 3 heures, roby67 a dit :

1)      How were will the sellers be payed if their goals are  reached ? < Sois attentive à la concordance des temps.

2)      Do we have enough possibilities to open many stores in China?

3)       What are the marketing aids to reach the target of 10 million turnover (chiffre d’affaire)  in 2008? << Dans un nom composé de nom + nom, celui qui qualifie l'autre prend donc valeur d'adjectif et se place DEVANT.